my first kiss.

June 5, 2010
By bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant


Soft to the touch,

Innocent and sweet.

Passion, this is where it first meets.

Two parts will become one,

This is where your heart unravels and begins to come
undone.

It only lasts a moment, and in a flash it's gone to soon.

No doubt it will come again, sending those same
butterflies through your body.

It's soft and gentle, oh so sweet.

This is where the two parts meet.

His and hers come together again,

Stealing breaths, with love they send.

Pulling apart, you never want to do,

But remember, your one wish just came true.


This is a metaphor poem. Please comment and tell me what you think of it.



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on Jul. 4 2010 at 12:59 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 111 comments

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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

thank you so much i love your peoms too

on Jul. 3 2010 at 3:13 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

awww this is a kute poem, chica

i love it...keep it up:)



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