Loves Direction

May 13, 2010
By Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
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Smile, happy looks good on you!!! ( :


They had nothing to say to each other anymore because they already knew everything about each other. The silence seemed to build an invisible wall between them in an instant. How was it even possible that when you know everything about a person when you look at them they are still a stranger to you? But finally he broke the silence that had washed over the room.

“Lilly,” he said. “If you don’t love me then why did you even bother coming here today?” The look in his eyes said that he was being completely serious.

She took a moment to find the right words before opening her mouth to speak. “I came here tonight, Lee, because love brought me to this place tonight. But ,Lee, I am leaving here today because love has put me on a different path.”

The words had given her an extra burst of energy. She grabbed her bag off the floor and fled from the building. As she ran out the door it felt like her heart was actually breaking in two. She had always dreamed of leaving but she had never realized it would be this hard to walk away.


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This peice is rlly dear to my heart post a comment and tell me wat u think about it ; )

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on Jun. 1 2010 at 3:29 pm
Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
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Smile, happy looks good on you!!! ( :

thnxz for that (:

on May. 20 2010 at 3:34 pm
Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
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Smile, happy looks good on you!!! ( :

ur welcome

 


on May. 20 2010 at 3:21 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

thts what i was thnkng... but i wasn't sure... thnx for explaining this to me!!!

on May. 20 2010 at 2:19 pm
Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Smile, happy looks good on you!!! ( :

yea thats kinda wat i was going for that she loved him but it just wasnt right for her to stay so she had to leave

on May. 19 2010 at 10:42 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

im confused.... is that how she feels?? like she dont want to leave, but yet wants to leave like she has for a long long long time???? please explain this to me...

on May. 19 2010 at 4:18 pm
My.Heart.Is.Yours BRONZE, L.A, California
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I don't know who invented high heels, but all women owe him a lot.
-Marilyn Monroe

This is fuckkin amazinggg!

HelloLove said...
on May. 19 2010 at 12:06 pm
HelloLove, Dexter, Michigan
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Twinkle, twinkle, little bat! How I wonder what you're at.
-Hatter
Tut, tut, child! Everything's got a moral, if only you can find it.
-Dutchess

I feel you. I love this article! 

on May. 19 2010 at 10:27 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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learn from your past to live for the future.

You're quite welcome.  Anytime :)

on May. 19 2010 at 9:19 am
Kiddvicious BRONZE, Tobyhanna, Pennsylvania
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Live you life to the fullest.

I can relate to how that person feels, but overall it was great I loved it keep it up. ;)

on May. 18 2010 at 2:47 pm
Syarra_Greenwood BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
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Smile, happy looks good on you!!! ( :

Ty u so much you hav no idea how much that comment ment to me. Actually i wrote this for one of my classes at skool. ( ; thnxz for the advice

on May. 18 2010 at 10:26 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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learn from your past to live for the future.

It sounds as if you are struggling.  Don't worry about it.  The writing is, I guess, average, nothing special, but it conveys your point well in its few paragraphs.  Again, don't worry about whatever your going through, but place your trust in God and He will look after you.  God bless!


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