Love Melting into the Horizon

March 16, 2010
By TWLOHA SILVER, Seattle, Washington
TWLOHA SILVER, Seattle, Washington
5 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am Strong because I am Weak
I am Beautiful because I know my Flaws
I am a Lover Because I'm a Fighter
I am Fearless because I have bee Afraid
I am Wise because I have been Foolish
...and I can Laugh because I've known Sadness


i never knew you loved me until those moments I lay ther. the sky was pink with a fading blue as the once high shing sun set. the wind whispered to the trees and the grass danced. There was so much beauty around me yet i was dying. you showed up beside me to keep me company and held my hand tighly but at the same time gently. we lye there together in complete silence holding a mysterious thign for one another. tears flowed down our sun warmed cheeks as we watched the sun melt. we looked into each others eyes and to my surprise i found that mystery we held, I found that we had a love for one another and you were willing to die in my presence ven if it wasn't your time. When the sun had comepletely melted and the sky was a cold and painful vlue we were gone, but love was still with us. I never knew you loved me until those moments i lay there.


The author's comments:
It was something that just started to come to me and I kinda started to cry when i was done.

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on Apr. 6 2010 at 10:11 am
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

This is so sweet! I loved it. Check speeling and some grammar but other than that it was fantastic! It was short ans simple, but so powerful! :)

Kajersej said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 4:06 am
Good Job, Mate.




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