Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Love Melting into the Horizon

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
i never knew you loved me until those moments I lay ther. the sky was pink with a fading blue as the once high shing sun set. the wind whispered to the trees and the grass danced. There was so much beauty around me yet i was dying. you showed up beside me to keep me company and held my hand tighly but at the same time gently. we lye there together in complete silence holding a mysterious thign for one another. tears flowed down our sun warmed cheeks as we watched the sun melt. we looked into each others eyes and to my surprise i found that mystery we held, I found that we had a love for one another and you were willing to die in my presence ven if it wasn't your time. When the sun had comepletely melted and the sky was a cold and painful vlue we were gone, but love was still with us. I never knew you loved me until those moments i lay there.




Join the Discussion


This article has 2 comments. Post your own!

unwritten~love said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 10:11 am:
This is so sweet! I loved it. Check speeling and some grammar but other than that it was fantastic! It was short ans simple, but so powerful! :)
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Kajersej said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:06 am:
Good Job, Mate.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback