Painful Senses

March 11, 2010
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Poison flowing through the air, people gasping for a last breath. Nick and Chris feel helpless in a concealed, locked down area. There is nothing they can do but pray. Their beloved friends are banging against the glass and falling to the cold ground. Nick, about to tear up, looks up and sees a treacherous sight. The women he has known and loved for his whole life was starting to cough. "Noooo!" cried Nick. The beloved Claire dropped to the ground, taking her last breath of oxygen, and perished to the cold ground.

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ktbug96 said...
May 14, 2010 at 9:05 pm

short. sweet. superb.

wonderful imagery ^^

Meli(: said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 10:54 pm
Wow thats great it you wrote more on it it could be even better! good job (:
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