Painful Senses

March 11, 2010
By kirkir BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
kirkir BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Poison flowing through the air, people gasping for a last breath. Nick and Chris feel helpless in a concealed, locked down area. There is nothing they can do but pray. Their beloved friends are banging against the glass and falling to the cold ground. Nick, about to tear up, looks up and sees a treacherous sight. The women he has known and loved for his whole life was starting to cough. "Noooo!" cried Nick. The beloved Claire dropped to the ground, taking her last breath of oxygen, and perished to the cold ground.

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ktbug96 SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 9:05 pm
ktbug96 SILVER, Jericho, New York
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Favorite Quote:
~Make a wish, it's up to you, find the strength inside, and watch your dreams come true, you don't need a shooting star, the magic's right there in your heart, close your eyes, believe, and make a wish~ (yes it's from a song :D)

short. sweet. superb.

wonderful imagery ^^

Meli138 said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 10:54 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Like a bird with broken wings its not how high he flies but the song he sings"
"Everybody live like its the last day you will ever see tell me tell me do you feel the pressure now?"

Wow thats great it you wrote more on it it could be even better! good job (:

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