New Life(part 1)

March 21, 2010
"Goodbye Shakira" everybody yelled as i walked off the bus. That was the last day i would be riding that bus. I would be going to a new school.
The day I left was when i was in the th grade. i would be going to Ferndale Middle School.
As soon as i walked into my new class room a girl came up to me
"Hi i am Taylor. What is your name"
"My name is Shakira" I could feel the many eyes in the class room stairing at me.
"Oh my middle name is Shakira. Come sit over here in front of me" I had a smile on my face because she was kind of funny. She was arguing with guy i had to sit beside of. His name was Xavier Daneils. S o i just sat ther laughing at the comments they was making. I looked around the room and noticed that i knew many of these people from elementary school, so i waved at them. I already missed half of the day so we was in math class.
The day I came was a wensday and ther was feild trip coming up on Friday. It was an ACC game, so I decided to go.

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TheReader said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:06 am
It was a bit rushed. I would reread this before submitting it. You have a lot of misspelled words and your past tense and future tenses are wrong. Good job, though.
altimesmiles replied...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 7:58 pm
i will keep that in mind
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