The Moonfall

February 25, 2010
We stood there,
Still as could be,
Both of us silent,
Afraid to speak the truth.

Looking in his eyes,
I knew that the time had come,
The time to let go.

Neither of us said a thing,
As I gave his hand one last tug,
And walked away.

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Shahed said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 7:45 pm
I read this once, and twice!
at first I didnt quiet get it .. I made it pretty silent then read it . .. It made sense the 2nd time! nice work!
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:14 pm
Thanks. This piece was one of the first ones I published on Teen Ink.
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 3:06 pm
aww dats sad. gr8 job wit the emotion in it :)) <3 it
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:15 pm

Why thank you, dear.

I'm glad you like it. :)

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