A SAD CURSE AND A HAPPY BLESSING

February 17, 2010
By socrprncss12 SILVER, Weslaco, Texas
socrprncss12 SILVER, Weslaco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
With God, Anything is Possible


I ASKED FOR YOU ON THIS VERY SAD DAY. I PICTURED YOU HERE SITTING NEXT TO ME ON MY BED WIPING AWAY THE TEARS WITH YOUR LARGE HANDS. YOU’D PULL ME INTO YOUR ARMS, AND I LAY MY HEAD AGAINST YOUR BROAD CHEST. I’D WRAP MY ARMS AROUND YOUR WAIST. OUR FIRST FOR THE SORROW WAS PLANTED ON MY FOREHEAD AND SLOWLY WENT DOWN TO MY LIPS. YOUR GENTLE KISSES DID NOT GROW AGGRESSIVE BUT WARM AND SOFT. I THINK OF THAT SUMMER NIGHT WHEN YOU ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU MY INNOCENCE AND THE SAME WOULD BE FOR ME AS I TOOK YOURS. WE TRIED YET SOMEHOW I COULDN’T CONTINUE THE EXPLORATION AND WEPT BECAUSE I COULDN’T GIVE YOU WHAT YOU WANTED. YOU WERE JUST IN YOUR JEANS AND HELD ME THE WHOLE NIGHT SAYING IT WASN’T MY FAULT. I REACH TO KISS YOU NOW BUT ITS JUST AIR THIS VERY SAD DAY. I GET UP,SLIP INTO MY BLACK DRESS, AND LOOK AT MYSELF IN THE MIRROR AND SEE A REFLECTION OF THAT TIME WE TRIED AGAIN TO TAKE EACH OTHER’S INNOCENCE THIS PAST WINTER AT THE CABIN. THIS TIME WE EXPLORED ALL THE WAY AND NEVER LOOKED BACK. I LIFT UP MY BLACK DRESS AND NOTICE THE BUMP IN MY STOMACH AND WANT TO SMILE BUT I WEEP. YOU SAID WE’D RAISE IT TOGETHER, AND WE’D BE TOGETHER FOREVER. I THINK BACK TO THAT NIGHT MY EYES FILLED WITH RAGE OF THE DRUNK DRIVER WHO TOOK YOU FROM ME. BUT I REMEMBER THAT THIS FUTURE HUMAN BEING IS ALL I NEED TO REMIND ME OF YOU.


The author's comments:
JUST A THOUGHT THAT CAME TO MIND AS I HEARD A COUNTRY SONG.

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on Feb. 28 2010 at 7:58 am
alwayswriting14 SILVER, Northport, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything makes sense yet nothing makes sense."

Awww, this was so sad but amazing writing. You conveyed the story to the reader very simply yet sweetly. I loved it.

on Feb. 26 2010 at 6:37 pm
rachelnicole GOLD, Arlington, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Maybe My Heart Really Didn't Skip A Beat....And Maybe The Twinkle In Your Eye Was The Sun Reflecting Weird, And Maybe The Feeling In My Stomach Was Just Not Having Enough For Breakfast...And Maybe I just Thought It Was Love"

this is actually really good and sad.

i like were your coming from with this story

on Feb. 26 2010 at 4:45 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

I thought this was pretty good. Caps lock though? Is that supposed to contribute to the story? In my oppinion it distracted me from the base of it. Good job though, and keep writing.

babygirl1997 said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 12:02 pm
this was very good but it ws also very sad i almost strated to cry but then it had me think of that one special person in my life it was really good


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