It Was Always You

February 1, 2010

I didn’t know it was you that wrote that love note when my boyfriend broke up with me. The note said exactly what I wanted to hear. I looked up and saw that you were staring at me. The smile painted across your face looked more like a smirk. I thought you were laughing at my tear-streaked face. I slammed my locker and stomped into the sea of teenagers. It was you I met at the masquerade ball. The next day, when you asked me out on a date, I didn’t even suspect you. It wasn’t until I met you down an aisle, dressed in white, did I finally realize, “It was you all along” I whispered. You just smiled and nodded. When said our I do’s and our lips met. This kiss was different, because I finally realized it was you all along.



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on May. 30 2010 at 12:55 pm
Mykindapeopledontcarewhatyouthink BRONZE, Gueydan, Louisiana
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Thans Alot! :)

on May. 29 2010 at 1:42 pm
Green8a8 SILVER, NY, New York
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im the author of my life, unfortunately im writing in pen therefore i can't erase nothing about it.-by some crazy friend of mine

wow this is really good

it was soo cute 5 stars


on Feb. 23 2010 at 8:23 pm
Mykindapeopledontcarewhatyouthink BRONZE, Gueydan, Louisiana
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thank you:)

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:35 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

wonderful work! Keep writting

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:15 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

I absolutely love this. Great work!

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:08 pm
Mykindapeopledontcarewhatyouthink BRONZE, Gueydan, Louisiana
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my pleasure it was a great story

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:08 pm
Mykindapeopledontcarewhatyouthink BRONZE, Gueydan, Louisiana
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i was thinking about making it longer and putting the date and how he proposed, i wanted to see how readers reacted to this little bit. Thanks for reading my article. i love your work

on Feb. 22 2010 at 1:54 pm
serendipitous615 PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Do you want to know the secret of self esteem? Here it is: If you want confidence, then understand how much you matter to God. If God loves you, who cares what anybody else thinks."

i like this, its sweet and has a good plot. the only thing that id recomend is not rushing it as much. it seemed as if it was missing a little in parts. like where she went on the date, i felt like the girl was still mad at the guy from the joke she thought he was playing on her. maybe if you put some detail in what happened it would flow a bit better. but besides that i like it :) and thank you for reading and commenting on my articles!

on Feb. 16 2010 at 4:21 am
katiepickelsimer GOLD, Dededo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Throw your dreams into space like a kite, and you do not know what it will bring back, a new life, a new friend, a new love.

-Anais Nin

I love this. also thank you for commenting on my work!!

on Feb. 15 2010 at 2:45 pm
Mykindapeopledontcarewhatyouthink BRONZE, Gueydan, Louisiana
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thank you so much! I like to think that I touch readers in that way :)

on Feb. 14 2010 at 5:07 pm
BrittanyHale SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A Kiss is a lovely trick,designed by nature to stop word when speech becomes superflous.

Lovely.Its very little but I could almost cry.:))It was very sweet.


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