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Sway with Me

January 26, 2010
By Anonymous

Should I leave this place?Should I leave and never come back?I had the weirdest dream last night.I was standing in the middle of a field with millions of wild flowers.Almost out of nowhere a black figure came to me."Sway with me."he said in almost a whisper. What should I do?He put one hand out for me.I warily took it.His hand was cold'but not so cold that I wanted to jerk away.His hand was as smoothh as glass and as rough as stone.Who was he?'Sway with me."He said in that loud,but soft voice.I was slipping into eternal bliss.Was this a dream or was it real?I couldn't tell the difference.Right now I didn't want to.I heard this small beeping noise in the back of my head.It was slowly getting louder.The man's hand was slowly slipping out of mine.I tried to hold on'but his hand was already out of mine.What is happening to me?I woke up shaking and sweating.Where was I?


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I was sitting at my school's computer when I learned about the website.This story just popped into my head.

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on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:18 pm
LeeAnn1996 GOLD, Vernon, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
There's nothing to be afraid of if you face it first.

Thanks.I will write plenty more.

on Jan. 28 2010 at 8:17 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Gosh, i love this. So different, so unique! Ugh! Want to read more from you! LOVED IT!

on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:47 pm
Love~the~LORD<3 BRONZE, Vernon, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let the fear of dying keep you from living. - Me
Smile and the world will smile with you-My NANNY

Love u kk u need to teach me how to write that good lol

on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:15 pm
LeeAnn1996 GOLD, Vernon, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
There's nothing to be afraid of if you face it first.

Thank You very much!

Chelley GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 9:35 am
Chelley GOLD, Baltiomre, Maryland
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it's really creative... you should write more