EC+AM=4ever Chapter 29 (Part 2)

December 29, 2009
By TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.


There was a loud pounding at the door. I jolted awake and sat upright. When I looked at the alarm clock, it said 1:45 a.m.

I groaned and rolled out of bed, glancing over at Cole who was still sound asleep. When I got to the door of the hotel room, I opened it up to find none other than Ash standing there looking infuriated.

"Is your stuff packed up?" he demanded.

"Shh, keep it down." I told him. "Cole's sleeping."

He scowled, "Why the hell should I care if that scumbag is still asleep or not? I hate him so much right now. I can't believe you two would even think about sleeping in the same room together. Who's idea was that anyways?"

I looked down at the pine green carpeted floor, "Cole's,"

"I knew it! This was his plan all along!" he cried.

I heard Cole stirring in his sleep, and I turned my head to find him sitting up. "Who's at the door?" he asked, followed by a yawn.

"It's me, Ash." Ash stormed into the room and flipped on the lights. Cole's eyes widened at the sudden brightness and he squinted at Ash in disbelief.

"What are you doing here?" Cole asked him.

"I came here to pick up Evalynne." Ash replied evenly. "I heard that you were inappropriately touching her."

Cole chuckled lazily, "What are you, my mother?"

"No, but I am Evalynne's boyfriend. And I wasn't going to let her spend another waking moment with you."

"Ash, just relax," I told him calmly.

"Relax?" he shouted. "How do you expect me to relax when this tool is feeling you up?"

I bit my lip, feeling myself blush. "Just don't yell so loud," I murmured.

He shook his head in rage, "Evalynne, you're acting like this is no big deal!"

"That's because it isn't." Cole remarked, standing up out of bed.

Ash deadpanned him, "Shut up, before I get even more angry."

"I'm not scared of you." Cole scoffed. "And don't act so tough, because you're not."

"Oh really?" Ash demanded. And then to my horror, he swung his fist out, punching Cole right in the face. Cole collapsed to the ground with a thud.

"Ash!" I cried.

"Would you please keep it down in here? People are trying to sleep!" a man called out. I turned around to find him standing in our doorway, with a tired and angry expression on his face. When he saw Cole lying on the ground with a huge bruise on his cheek, he glanced up at Ash who was panting in fury.

"Um...sorry for all the noise. We promise to keep it down." I apologized lamely.

The man shook his head, "I'm calling the front desk." Then he scurried off down the hallway.

"Great," I muttered. "You've been in this hotel for five minutes and you've already gotten yourself kicked out." I said to Ash.

"Well sorry, but he was making me mad." he replied.

"Yeah, well right now you're making me kind of mad."

"Sorry," he murmured.

I just rolled my eyes and kneeled down next to Cole, getting a closer look at his face. Ash had punched him really hard. I could tell by the black and blue bruise the size of a golf ball on his face. Cole's mouth was also slightly open and I could see blood trickling out of it. Ash must have really damaged his teeth.

Within minutes the manager and two security guards were in the room, dragging Ash out and pushing past me to kneel next to Cole and tend to his wound. I backed up and watched it all play out. And that's when I realized what a monster Ash was.

I never would have thought that he was capable of hurting Cole the way he did. And I never was really able to picture him killing his dad either. The way he talked to his mom sometimes was just so horrible. I barely knew anything about Ash.

And there was no way I was going to date, and definitely not marry someone who I knew nothing about. It seemed like every time Ash got angry, he snapped and hurt someone, whether it be emotionally or physically. And I didn't like that.

In fact, I hated it.

Author's Note: Team Ash or Team Cole?


The author's comments:
This is by far my favorite chapter! It made me laugh so hard when I was writing it! So, did this chapter make you switch teams? Team Ash or Team Cole?
ENJOY :)

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Catiestar GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 12:10 am
Catiestar GOLD, Clayton, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
You be the anchor that keeps my feet on the ground, I'll be the wings that keep your heart in the clouds <3

What? How is Ash so hot and cold?

Team Cole...


on May. 1 2011 at 12:16 pm
twix.n.pixi.stix7 GOLD, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"you can dream big
or you can dream small
the important thing
is that you're dreaming at all"
~me! haha i wrote that :)

i totally agree

on Mar. 21 2011 at 8:54 pm
kkayla3897 BRONZE, Ogden, Utah
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Oh come on!!! I give up!!!!

on Dec. 20 2010 at 9:51 am
CameronG. BRONZE, Warsaw, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Your Options
1)Love me
2)Leave me alone

duh lol any guy i know would do tht lol

 


KatB14 SILVER said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 8:56 am
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"You don't always get the waterfall short-cut in Mario-Kart. That's life."-I.P.

"Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love." -Hamlet

Of course hes going to try to feel her up when their making out in a hotel room! What guy wouldnt do that? I bet Ash would, if hed been the guy.

on Aug. 19 2010 at 8:00 pm
Bookdragon GOLD, Mona, Utah
11 articles 6 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
By Endurance We Conquer ~Ernest Shackleton

You're a really great writer, but this "I like him, now I don't" stuff is starting to get a little annoying.  Why doesn't she dump both, and find someone else?

on Jul. 24 2010 at 11:23 pm
Still Ash!!

M.S.S. GOLD said...
on May. 28 2010 at 8:32 pm
M.S.S. GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"WACKADOO!!!" "You made a funny!" "Red Seven! Red Seven!! Red Seh-ven-a!!!" "Swaaaaag!!!!" "Ratchet" "God Said No" "God Said Yes"

I like them both....i'll date either one

on May. 23 2010 at 10:09 pm
ashkash95 SILVER, New Hyde Park, New York
9 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love never fails." 1 Corinthians 13:8

wow this is like my third comment in a row...but still Team Ash he so needed to punch Cole....I mean if Evalynne can love him after finding out he killed his dad why can't she handle him sticking up for her?!

on Apr. 12 2010 at 6:40 pm
thisisascreenname BRONZE, Sugarloaf, California
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If im right then Cole is the same as Jacob. just like with the twilight books im not gonna pick who i think she should date. its not my decision anyways.

... however, I would date cole.


on Apr. 11 2010 at 12:18 am
katiebeth___ SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Que sera, sera.:)

Wow, Evalyne really need to make up her mind! aha. but, i think i'm Team Cole. He's sweet, but he's kind of a jerk too. lol. hmm. i dunno!:P

on Apr. 4 2010 at 5:14 am
christian.e SILVER, Dutch Harbor, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
The eternal silence of these infinite spaces frightens me --Pascal

I'm totally on TEAM COLE. I mean unless he becomes a complete meathead later. Also really hate Evalynne right now because she won't make up her mind.

on Mar. 19 2010 at 9:03 am
esmeralda BRONZE, Oak Park, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know your inlove when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams." dr suess "you are my glue without you, id be nothing but broken peices" miley cyrus
"when i saw yo i fell inlove, and you smiled because you knew"

she need to stop going back and forth and make up her mind

and he had a prety good reason hit that lame in the face

on Feb. 10 2010 at 12:22 pm
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

I'm kinda getting annoyed of Evalynne and how she can't make up her mind! lol

on Feb. 8 2010 at 7:36 pm
contrygurl BRONZE, Sanbernardino, California
4 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
to love and to be loved is lifes greatest joy

i think im still on team cole!!! ash is being a jerk

on Jan. 24 2010 at 11:14 am
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

lol, i actually have the entire story posted on this website called quizilla .com if u wanna read it. :)

mismay said...
on Jan. 24 2010 at 9:02 am
ey wheres the rest of the story!

on Jan. 19 2010 at 9:07 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

lol, that's ok, you can comment all you want! :)

thanks so much for liking it too!

MariahMundi said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 7:15 pm
okay, sorry that i'm commenting on your stuff so much, but that's because you are mixing this up a little bit, you know, creating, like, a lot of controversy, and that's so totally GREAT.

i dunno now, but i am a very stubborn person, and i still like ash. GO TEAM ASH!!!!!!!!!


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