December 3, 2009
I lay on my bed crying my eyes out. “I hate him,”
“No you don’t,” My BFF Bell said.
“Yes I freaking’ do!”
“But-but. . .”
“I’m just saying we don’t know what happened yet.”
“I don’t need any physic to tell me what happened! He was on he bench kissing her!” I said rolling over I stared at my ceiling where a picture of him was taped. I got up and ripped it up. “My enemy, he kissed Sasha. And I hate her and him.”
Forever, forever, forever-r-r,
“It’s him,” Bell said. “I’ll answer.”
“’Kay,” I said.
“Hello?” she said in her sweet but I’d freaking kill you in a heart beat. “Oh hi Brad. Yes shes here . . . no she kinda hates you. What? Oh ok hold on. . .”
She put him on speaker. Then she held her finger to her lips letting me know to be quiet.
“Ok,” she said.
“Listen Bell you know I would NEVER EVER cheated on Tina right?”
“I guess. . .”
“Well I wouldn’t. Sasha kissed me . . . it was so fast I was shocked. But trust me it was like kissing a wall, nothing at all like kissing Tina. And after Tina ran away I pushed Sasha and yelled at her. Then I saw Tina and my heart dropped, Bell, it really did. I love Tina. I really, really, really, do love her.”
“You do?” I asked losing it.
“Yeah I love you Tanya.”
“I love you too Brad!”

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laughingforeverK said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 7:31 pm
Why does it say 'Tanya' instead of 'Tina' at the end?
loveydoveycool9 said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 10:40 pm
I really liked yor story
Sandywolf said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:18 pm

Cheating is never fun, let me tell you, haha.

Good dialogue, and a happy ending. My kinda story ;)

DHgirl replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 8:21 pm
thxs and I KNOW
thoughtfulsoul said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:34 pm
This is cute :) I kinda liked how you only used dialouge.It was something new and different. 
DHgirl replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 2:55 pm
thxs if you lik this keep an eye out for my latest novel on here called 'Greenland High'
~MidnightAngel~ replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 4:51 pm
Awww:') Such a sweet story! I love it:)
DHgirl replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 9:00 pm
thxs! i like this but ive writen better. but my best is going to be greenland High.
face. said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:16 pm
aww. that's great.
DHgirl said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:20 pm
i love this story. . . i think ever girl has been here . . . or will be . . .
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