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Heartbroken

I lay on my bed crying my eyes out. “I hate him,”
“No you don’t,” My BFF Bell said.
“Yes I freaking’ do!”
“But-but. . .”
“STOP DENFENDING HIM HE CHEATED ON ME!”
“I’m just saying we don’t know what happened yet.”
“I don’t need any physic to tell me what happened! He was on he bench kissing her!” I said rolling over I stared at my ceiling where a picture of him was taped. I got up and ripped it up. “My enemy, he kissed Sasha. And I hate her and him.”
Forever, forever, forever-r-r,
“It’s him,” Bell said. “I’ll answer.”
“’Kay,” I said.
“Hello?” she said in her sweet but I’d freaking kill you in a heart beat. “Oh hi Brad. Yes shes here . . . no she kinda hates you. What? Oh ok hold on. . .”
She put him on speaker. Then she held her finger to her lips letting me know to be quiet.
“Ok,” she said.
“Listen Bell you know I would NEVER EVER cheated on Tina right?”
“I guess. . .”
“Well I wouldn’t. Sasha kissed me . . . it was so fast I was shocked. But trust me it was like kissing a wall, nothing at all like kissing Tina. And after Tina ran away I pushed Sasha and yelled at her. Then I saw Tina and my heart dropped, Bell, it really did. I love Tina. I really, really, really, do love her.”
“You do?” I asked losing it.
“Yeah I love you Tanya.”
“I love you too Brad!”



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laughingforeverK said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 7:31 pm
Why does it say 'Tanya' instead of 'Tina' at the end?
 
loveydoveycool9 said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 10:40 pm
I really liked yor story
 
Sandywolf said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:18 pm

Cheating is never fun, let me tell you, haha.

Good dialogue, and a happy ending. My kinda story ;)

 
DHgirl replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 8:21 pm
thxs and I KNOW
 
thoughtfulsoul said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:34 pm
This is cute :) I kinda liked how you only used dialouge.It was something new and different. 
 
DHgirl replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 2:55 pm
thxs if you lik this keep an eye out for my latest novel on here called 'Greenland High'
 
~MidnightAngel~ replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 4:51 pm
Awww:') Such a sweet story! I love it:)
 
DHgirl replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 9:00 pm
thxs! i like this but ive writen better. but my best is going to be greenland High.
 
face. said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:16 pm
aww. that's great.
 
DHgirl said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:20 pm
i love this story. . . i think ever girl has been here . . . or will be . . .
 
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