Destruction is beautiful

October 21, 2009
By AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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PROLUGE:


"Your eyes are beautiful Ashely", those are the words that I replay in my head. Those are the words that the captivating creature first said to me. Thos are the words that entangle me into his world, if only I knew the hell that stood before me, if only I would have listend to the awful felling that felt like shock therepy to my guts. If only if only if only. But, there is no "if only", there is only now. I do regret everything, even though at one time, everything I have now was exactly what I wanted. I wish I would have known.

It was a Tuesday he first spoke to me. When he said those words, " Your beautiful Ashley". Well I know your confused and I know you think I'm crazy... which I am, but that comes later. So let me Start from the begining.


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on Apr. 27 2010 at 3:57 pm
allgood15 SILVER, Quitman, Mississippi
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u have to love to be loved

great i really like this but please finish it add on it or something ...its got me wondering wats gone happen next! but excelent work!

on Mar. 5 2010 at 10:42 pm
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
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you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

this is amazing, so full of emotion! you are brilliant. but i agree that you should finish this one i am left at the edge of my seat. (: but over all beautiful poem.

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:57 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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GGGAAAHHH!!! My computer is a total dumb sht. Anyway, is this maybe a continuation of "Consequences"? I was wondering because in the Author's Comments section of that poem you wrote "Destruction is beautiful." Anyway... awesome poem I really like how you have a prologue to a poem in poem porm, that's really cool and creative. I've never seen that before. Also, I would love to read the rest of this when you have it posted, so if you ever do, it would be cool if you could just leave a comment on one of my pieces or something notifying me cos I think this is awesome and I really want to read more! :)

on Feb. 19 2010 at 7:17 am
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

what does happens next? you built up the suspense, now quench it before everyone goes insane... please? ;)

on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:20 pm
ofpaintedroses GOLD, Berne, Indiana
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"How long is forever?"
"Sometimes just one second."

a cmpliment and a request in one comment? Nice.

i like this, very good... hooked already, from the first line. post more.

Jazzy said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 1:37 pm
Jazzy, Stickney, Illinois
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Running will get you no were so don\'t hide from it.

i agree i want to hear more,i want to know what happens.please write more.also check my stuff out

JackXD SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 3:24 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
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this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

what happens next???? i like itt so far am into it.

check some of my stuff out too i think you would enjoy it


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