Just Like You This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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Today, I made a boy out of pillows and old clothes to look like you.
I told him that I liked his eyes, that they were a spectacular shade of blue. He did not ­compliment me back.
I read him my poetry. He did not offer me a ­critique or wild exclamations of how much he loved my writing. Instead, he stayed quiet.
I walked with him in the woods behind my house. He did not try to hold my hand.
I baked him a lovely chocolate cake – your ­favorite. He did not flatter my delicious ­baking skills.
And when he grew tired I set him down next to me on the bed. He did not caress me, he did not kiss me, he did not whisper sweet nothings in my ear, and he did not tell me that he loved or needed me.
Yes, I made a boy out of pillows today. He doesn't just look like you; he acts like you, too.

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prettylittlewriter said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 10:00 pm
wow, that was good. very simple and to the point. lots of boys are like that! :) i know ur exact feeling. 
rosaposa said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 7:28 pm
this was so good! I wasn't expecting the ending to be like that at all. so GOOD!
*imagine_that* said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 5:04 pm
ArrowHeart replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 7:58 pm
atimm2013 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 9:11 pm
i love this! i love how at the end, you did the opposite of what i was expecting!
Dancing2222 said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 4:28 pm
oooo...Me like:)
BrittyBroo said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 3:18 pm
At first I thought that it was a bit creepy but then it turned out REALLY good :D
Steph0804 said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 11:13 pm
I thought you would say something about how this pillow-boy looked like you but would never be you and yada yada, but the sort of ironic twist at the end is EXCELLENT. :)
TiwiniS said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 8:31 pm

Very interesting!! I like it


prettylittlewriter said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 7:59 pm
that was clever. i liked it
singingwriter14 said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 6:24 pm
Oh that was clever. ;-)
beautifulmudblood said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 6:42 pm
This was positively brilliant. The way that you managed to have the heartbreak cut deep into the last line of your story was amazing, because the formers were so light... it was fantastic. This took true talent. I really enjoyed this. 
katherinetwizzee said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 8:59 pm
Thats so cute. Cause I acctually tried that once!
jazzy13 said...
Jun. 9, 2011 at 10:03 pm
tht was....AWESOME!!!! u totaly blew my mind!!
writerstar12 said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 12:07 pm
wow  that was very good :) l really liked it!
star2brite This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 31, 2011 at 10:42 am
Funny in a way and sad too. I really liked it!
hunnybuntwix said...
May 28, 2011 at 11:27 pm
wow this was amazing
Chasya said...
May 25, 2011 at 7:28 pm
lol dry. kind of sad, but true.
AnimalGirl said...
May 25, 2011 at 11:35 am

i really liked this. its sad, but in a... good way? lol, idk, but i like it. good job            =)


Mango19 said...
May 25, 2011 at 5:06 am
One of the best closing lines I've read on this site :)
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