A deep secret part 2

October 7, 2009
By JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is
"Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy".


CHAPTER 2

I slowly opened my eyes and then closed them quickly. The sun was very bright.
I felt someone place there hand on my forehead. "Someone bring me some water" I heard from a distance. I wanted to say no but I guess that ball hit me in the head harder then I thought because I couldn't get the words out. All I could do was moan.
I heard a little voice say "Here you go Jake".
I opened my eyes then and tried to sit up but when I did that Andy ,who was the one who brought the water, tripped and the cup of water fell on me.
"Well that woke her up" I heard someone say in a smug voice.
I looked around and saw Madaline smiling a wicked smile.
I tried to sit up but I fell back down.
"Ow" I muttered, I felt someone grab the top of my arms and pull me up.
I looked up to see it was Jacob who had grabbed me. "Can you stand?" he asked.
I shook my head yes, he let go of me and I tried to stand straight. It wasn't immpossible but it hurt.
I looked at the little kids surrounding me and that's when I saw Andy.
He looked so sad that I knew in an instant that he was the one who had kicked the ball.
"Andy" I said quietly "I forgive you". The poor boy! he ran up to me and hugged me so hard I thought I wouldn't be able to breath.
"I-I'm so sorry Le--Leah" he whispered.
I patted his head "Its alright Andy it wasn't your fault" I said "What do I always tell you when accidents happen".
"The ball goes where it wants to" he whispered.
"Thats right" I told him "Go with the others and kick the soccer ball'.
Andy left and I turned back to Jacob, "Thanks" I told him.
He shook his head and went back to sit Madaline.
I let out a little sigh and ran my hands through my hair.
Jacob Wright held me ME ! in his arms, I let out a little shriek and went back to teaching the kids.
Hoping I would see Jacob tomorrow

(To be continued)



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on Oct. 28 2011 at 9:49 pm
snowanngel BRONZE, Branson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your I will is more important than your IQ."
"You learn more from your failures than you do your accomplishments."

I like keep going!

on Sep. 11 2010 at 7:09 pm
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is
"Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy".

I'm writing it will be on soon

on Sep. 6 2010 at 3:03 pm
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is
"Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy".

I'll try soon

Lonleydandy said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 2:55 pm
WHERE, may I ask, IS THE REST!?

on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:54 pm
Mandinova SILVER, Danville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
Man performs and engenders so much more than he can or should have to bear. That's how he finds that he can bear anything. ~William Faulkner And "When life gives you Lemons ... you squeze them in someones eye!" yea i bet you just giggled a little

Please please write more!!!

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:51 pm
More, more, more, more, more please!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 6:58 pm
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is
"Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy".

thanks a bunch I really appreciate it!!!!!

on Jul. 18 2010 at 10:34 pm
Hope_is_everywhere BRONZE, Lone Grove, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is the irresistible desire to be desired irresistibly.
- Louis Ginsberg

I like it ALOT!!!!!!!!!!

on Jul. 14 2010 at 12:33 pm
JustAGirlNextDoor SILVER, Peachland, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think my favorite quote is
"Would you rather me tell you the truth and make you sad or lie and make you happy".

I'm sorry I haven't written more its just that I didn't think people actually liked it

on Jul. 10 2010 at 3:30 pm
Hope_is_everywhere BRONZE, Lone Grove, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is the irresistible desire to be desired irresistibly.
- Louis Ginsberg

when are you going to write more?

on May. 18 2010 at 10:58 pm
paninilene DIAMOND, Long Beach, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Done & Over"

"Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength."

"People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth."

write more.... please? :) i like this story, it's cute!

lyrabear said...
on May. 2 2010 at 8:19 pm
i see what you mean i'll try to do better thanks

melone96 said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 3:56 pm
melone96, White Sulphur Springs, West Virginia
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i liked the first one more...the cliff hanger u placed on the first was good but the chapter leading up 2 it wasn't as good...don't take it the wrong way, this was good but keep writing so i can keep reading more and more!

lyrabear said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 5:03 pm
thanks i'll try

on Dec. 16 2009 at 10:36 am
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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ok lol as long as i get more hehe ur writing is really good though

lyrabear said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:14 pm
thanks i'll try

erika4964 said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 5:12 pm
This was a cute story it already has me wanting more. Keep writing!! ;)

lyrabear said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 4:27 pm
thanks im taking a break from it but i'll try

on Dec. 15 2009 at 10:34 am
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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more i need more hurrry and right more lol

The Reader! said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 1:43 pm
Great! Hopefully it's soon!


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