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If I told you I loved you?
Would you say it too?
Or would I be alone.
Trapped in a Taylor Swift tone Would there be a love story,
or is there no such glory.
Will there be a force,
or no white horse?
If I said I love you,
Would we be through????




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amber A. said...
Oct. 25, 2012 at 3:18 pm:
definetly a word artist. I  love  it!!
 
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amber A. said...
Oct. 25, 2012 at 3:18 pm:
definetly a word artist. I  love  it!!
 
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sullierosex3 said...
Oct. 25, 2012 at 9:44 am:
LOVE this <3
 
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Fia-fia said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 10:21 am:

Though this is a poem, it is really nice. Most girls can relate competely, so very nice job. Very simple, but a good message, Thank you

:)

 
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smilesunshine said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 3:47 pm:

Love this. :) Partially because I know the feeling... :P 

The Taylor Swift reference is perfect. :)

And this whole thing is so true... those three words can scare a man off in an instant.

 
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drivenbiimusic said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 1:18 pm:
it's really sad, but yeah . . . some guys will say they're through. i like that this is like a warning, a heads-up, to stop before they break, or fall. only tell a man you love him when you are ready. and if he's worth your love, he'll say he loves you back.
 
drivenbiimusic replied...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 1:19 pm :
'they' being other woman or girls.
 
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sifidragon12 said...
Apr. 24, 2011 at 6:32 pm:
I really loved this. I can relate to it
 
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loveisafriendshiponfire said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 11:27 am:
omg!!! this is wonderful!! i'm a song writer and i was wondering if i may use part of this to inspire my song?? i'll give all credit towards you for your inspiration.
 
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pklightning9 said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 3:41 pm:
This is really nice and it makes one wonder what would happen to everything they do and say. It is awesome!
 
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smilesunshine said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 9:05 pm:
I like how you talked about Taylor Swift. It's really cute and meaningful. It's cool. :) This is really good.
 
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xprezzionstar said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 10:37 am:
i like it thats all there is to it
 
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ShannonVictoria said...
Dec. 13, 2010 at 4:35 pm:
Cute! :) <3
 
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Cammie said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 9:41 pm:

U r so good.

This is sweet.

So many can relate to this.

 
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leneypanini said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 10:38 pm:
:O awwww~ :) cute
 
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terratazzcena said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 1:03 am:
lovee love lovee Taylor Swift and the way she can connect with her audience so well, as well as you.
 
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ashkash95 said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 7:58 pm:
super cute. i love the taylor swift reference! :)
 
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My.Heart.Is.Yours said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 1:44 pm:
Aww, This Is Really Cutee(:
 
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DominicangirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 29, 2010 at 11:06 am:

lol this is cuuuutteee

 

 
livingmylife4512 replied...
Oct. 30, 2010 at 5:46 pm :
I think your writing is very good. You have a talent (:
 
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