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Him...

September 24, 2009
By EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."


My heart melts in two when I see him, one half falling head-over-heels for his smile and the other half regretting my love. I am just sooo confused. I know he is a jerk, it's just... Not when I'm around him, he's so sweet around me. I mean, I just can't decide, if I should even try to move on or keep hope. I'm on a road of indecision. A road that is rocky and depressing yet sweet surprises along the way. It's hard, I have tried to stop thinking about him and that doesn't help or WORK. I still think about him everyday, and I always think about when we danced. When we danced, my heart skipped a million beats, my eyelashes fluttered, my hair flew, and we laughed and smiled. It was the best night of my life, except I know he doesn't like me as a girlfriend, but I don't care. I will wait for him. I am listening to this saying, "Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about." So, so far, I have decided that I am still trying to catch his eye. Our friendship was a huge rope. As the years passed by, I knew that our relationship became thinner and thinner. Before I knew what was happening the rope I had always counted on, became a thin yarn. I have tried making this yarn into a rope again, but it never works. I have tried and tried, but he never looks at me the same way anymore. He used to look me in the eyes, and his eyes would linger there. They were glued to me as if I was the only person in the world. Now, he looks for a second and then just smiles. He liked me but now it is too late. HE has moved on, and so should I. I can't. I am stuck in quicksand. He left me by myself. I was standing frozen by his eyes. He smiled, and then walked away. Now, I am sinking slowly in quicksand. He will not pull me out now. He has passed. Now, I will too. Eventually....



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MMOON PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 2:02 am
MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
26 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right"
I also have another "Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts"

I know exactly what you are going through in this poem. I can totally relate!!! I loved how you just put it all out there, very well done.   Please check out my poems and please comment and rate. :D

on Oct. 16 2012 at 7:05 pm
Wordartist SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree it will live its whole thinking its stupid." -Albert Einstein

OMGGGGGGGG i know EACTLY what you're talking about i'm going through the exact same thing right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Sep. 24 2012 at 3:45 pm
angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
24 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The boy never cried again, and he never forgot what he'd learned: that to love is to destroy, and that to be loved is to be the one destroyed.” -Jace Wayland City of Bones

i can totally relate to this, a lot of girls have probly gone through this situation, its a really great piece

on Apr. 23 2012 at 1:32 pm
i_am_so_very_large_and_towering SILVER, Mililani, Hawaii
5 articles 1 photo 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yet what is any ocean but a multitude of drops?"

great article! i can relate:(

on Apr. 23 2012 at 1:32 pm
i_am_so_very_large_and_towering SILVER, Mililani, Hawaii
5 articles 1 photo 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yet what is any ocean but a multitude of drops?"

great article! i can relate:(

on Apr. 1 2012 at 9:11 pm
JessixMathers GOLD, Urbana, Illinois
10 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter where you run I'll be right there, right behind you, in your nightmares - Eminem <3

Oh my god! This is amazing! I have been through this situation and now I'm happy to be out of it! haha, but yeah great story. I enjoyed every letter of it :)

on Jan. 26 2012 at 11:44 am
Marzipan_City BRONZE, Rockford, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee - Muhammad Ali

This is great! It's really good :)

on Dec. 13 2011 at 8:11 am
Kimberlee BRONZE, Bowman, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never ruin an apology with an excuse.
~Kimberly Johnson

Great job! I loved it

on Dec. 12 2011 at 4:05 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Well I'm sorry about that :( but no problem! and you are most definitely not a loser, if anyone's a loser, it's HIM! for not going out with you!

on Dec. 12 2011 at 4:02 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

I definitely will! :) and thank you for the lovely comment!

on Nov. 21 2011 at 5:01 pm
BeczLuvzYew BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life like there is no tomorrow, with endless laughs, and love as deep as the ocean

This is exactly what I needed today. I came to school today to find out that the guy i like is going out with my best frend crystal and she  never even bothered to tell me!! Thank you for showing me that im not a loser and it happens to everyone. :D

on Nov. 21 2011 at 4:21 pm
LifesIllusion BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't let your fears slow you down. Instead, chase them down and beat them."

I agree. Every girl has been in this situation one way or another. I can totally relate. but anyway, love the article!!!! Check out my work?! Thanks:)

on Oct. 30 2011 at 3:39 pm
artfullymade14 BRONZE, Chesapeak, Virginia
2 articles 5 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live as if you'll die tomorrow, dream as if you'll live forever."
-Unknown Author

I totally agree, this happens to atleast 75% of girls

 


on Oct. 8 2011 at 6:41 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
225 articles 4 photos 240 comments

I think every girl can relate to this in one way or another.

love everything about it

good job


on Aug. 15 2011 at 11:10 am
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Many thanks!!!! <3 

on Aug. 15 2011 at 11:09 am
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you so much :) 

AliLinnS GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2011 at 11:13 pm
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you, sweet Kate. And I'm truly sorry about this. I do feel...everything." -Casanova
Kiss The Girls by James Patterson

You're an amazing writer, Sweetheart. Way to hook me in. Good job. :)

on Jun. 20 2011 at 8:50 am
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 64 comments
I love the visuals you create, and i can directly relate to everything you say in this poem

on May. 28 2011 at 6:13 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Thank you so much <3

 


on Apr. 28 2011 at 9:37 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

awww(: well u r a really great writer. i hopee u continue!!!


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