Why Do I Always Go Down?

September 29, 2009
By WWDWD SILVER, Glenshaw, Pennsylvania
WWDWD SILVER, Glenshaw, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream like you'll live forever; live like you'll die today.


The only thing I remember from last night was falling. I was falling far, far down. That must be how I ended up where I am now. My naked body is lying in the bottom of a ravine. I see a towering cliff above me. The sun is at the tip, almost as if the cliff’s hand is holding the burning ball in its hand.
I slowly get up. My legs are scraped and bruised. There is a bite mark on my left shoulder, and it looked like an animal had bitten me. I looked around where I was. My feet were resting close to a small creek and my head was sitting in the grass. I saw a bush near-by, and I could just make out some type of clothing underneath.
I got up and ran over to them. There was a note with neat handwriting on top.
Figured you could use these…As soon as you’re dressed, go to 415 Linley Lane. I will be there. –G
I tossed the note aside and picked up the clothes. There was a bra, underwear, a h pair of jeans, a purple V-neck shirt, wooly socks, and a pair of hiking boots. I gladly slipped them on. I shivered. It was eerie, this place. There was no noise (except the creek), no wind. But, that was probably because I was down. And now I needed to find a way up.

TO BE CONT...



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on Jun. 3 2012 at 10:56 pm
KateLovesMusicAndArt BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
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Very nice! Can't wait until more!

BradRAB BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 11:45 am
BradRAB BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Dream big and dare to fail."

I guess because it's not complete I'm really confused. But it is very descriptive and it is intriguing. I am very interested to see how this will continue. However I'd appreciate it if you showed me things rather than told me. Some imagery was created, but not enough to elicit a "scared" emotion.

on Feb. 14 2012 at 9:53 am
mammothfrk PLATINUM, Mammoth Lakes, California
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Favorite Quote:
This is your life, are you who you want to be?

Good so far! keep it up!!!

on Jun. 1 2011 at 10:55 pm
booklover104 BRONZE, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have a couple of quotes i like... \"Success is not a doorway it\'s a staircase\"
2. \"Everything happens for a reason\"
3.\"Your worth consists in what you are and not in what you have\"-Thomas Edison

cool! I reallly like it, keep going.

 


on May. 26 2011 at 5:20 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That was scary! But it was really good.

Can you please check out my stories "True Colors" and "Death From Angels" I loved this!!!


on Feb. 27 2011 at 9:21 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

this was completely intriguing. cant wait to read the next part! you did an amazing job of grabbing your readers attention with something shocking. greatgreatgreat job overall :D

WWDWD SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2009 at 12:07 pm
WWDWD SILVER, Glenshaw, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream like you'll live forever; live like you'll die today.

The second part to this has been posted...here's the link: TeenInk.com/fiction/romance/article/143252/Why-Do-I-Always-Go-Down-Part-2/

on Oct. 15 2009 at 10:38 am
Madeline PLATINUM, Lake View Terrace, California
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Favorite Quote:
If you always see the positive, you'll never see the negative.

That was a bit disturbing, but i want to read more of it. Keep writing!

WWDWD SILVER said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 4:36 pm
WWDWD SILVER, Glenshaw, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream like you'll live forever; live like you'll die today.

I posted the new one, now I'm just waiting for the editors to approve it. The second one will be better because I didn't rush it. Much more happens in the second one, too. :D

on Oct. 11 2009 at 1:57 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

I NEED MORE!!!!

Great writing!!!

on Oct. 11 2009 at 1:44 pm
xxxVanessaxxx SILVER, Alexander, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"i CaNt Be AwAy fRoM hEr BeLlA, iT hUrTs ToO mUcH." (Jacob from the breaking dawn book)

write more, i need to figure out what happens to her, if i don't read more soon, i don't know how i'll go on.

on Oct. 9 2009 at 9:17 pm
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

Omg! I loved it! great, i wanna hear more!!!


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