Missing.

September 26, 2009
By EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
EternalMadness GOLD, Fresno, California
13 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go
Your eyes, they shine so bright
I want to save their light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how
When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It’s where my demons hide


I really wish I could forget the way you said I LOVE YOU. The way you looked so cute and how you held my hand too tight but never noticed. I really wish I could forget your hot breath obn my neck and how it felt when you kissed me. I really wish I could stop missing how subtle and simple you were too please. How you asked me what were three things i Loved about you and once i replied you got upset and said
"I would say three things I love about you, but I can't pick just three". I smiled so big and wrapped my arms around you.
I really wish none of this ever happened... The call that night broke my heart. I wake up everyday now, hoping to hear my phone ring and your voice on the other end. The call that night ruined my life. The call that night told me you were gone forever and i'd never kiss your beautiful face again. So now as im typing this and tears are rolling down my cheeks I can hear your voice in the background saying that you love me. Maybe I should'nt have taken all of those pills... But I could see your face in the back of my mind! so close I could almost touch it. Im fading quick now so Im gonna go meet you in the light. I love you sweet angel, sweet angel that left too fast.


The author's comments:
Sometimes we get pushed to far, to the point of having an unbearable weight on our shoulders that is weighing us down.

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mickeymouse said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 9:03 am
wow lots of emotions. nice writing style. keep it up:)

on Aug. 6 2011 at 10:24 am
NKsunshine BRONZE, Palatine, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don't need easy, I just need possible!" ~Bethany Hamilton

Great writing style!! This plot has potential to go amazing places, kep writing:)

on Mar. 27 2011 at 5:40 pm
Haley_Elizabeth GOLD, Wallingford, Vermont
12 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Embrace imperfection rather than hide your flaws."

Oh my gosh! Amazing! Your a wonderful writer, but I absolutely hate sad endings like this:(

hrf1434 GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2010 at 6:52 pm
hrf1434 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
10 articles 4 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge a Girl by Her Cover

Great writing it is awsome

on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:20 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments

I luv it and ur writing style.

U should be a romance writer.


on Aug. 17 2010 at 7:57 am
paranomial PLATINUM, Hyderabad, Other
21 articles 0 photos 55 comments
too good...it is an amazing story loved reading it..got loads of emotions 

on May. 23 2010 at 10:08 pm
paninilene DIAMOND, Long Beach, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Done & Over"

"Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength."

"People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth."

oh my gosh. LUV IT!! thanks for making me cry!! XD it was amazing. 

on May. 9 2010 at 3:59 pm
purplegiirl24 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not mean; ii jUst tell thee thruth"

w o w . " I really wish I could forget. . . how it felt when you kissed me." Amazing piece

on Mar. 20 2010 at 3:46 am
xoxoLissieM SILVER, Manila, Other
6 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stop acting dumb cause your usually the smart one and I'm the dumb one!"

dis got me crying....great story

on Jan. 3 2010 at 8:26 pm
xDarkxPixiex GOLD, Edmunds Twp., Maine
18 articles 4 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
You don't stop laughing because you grow old; you grow old because you stop laughing. and
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there's footprints on the moon. and
Sometimes the heart does things for reasons that reason cannot understand.

This sort of reminds of the book "Kissed by an angel" where the bf dies in a car accident but comes back as an angel to save the girl from being murdered! Your writing is really good! keep it up!

emily23 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 2:56 pm
emily23 BRONZE, Solon, Maine
3 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every story has an end, but in life every end is just a new beginning.

wow that's gotta suck for her i mean i wouldn't know how it feels to have my bf die but i know how u want to call them and tell them everything but like with me they don't want to hear it they want someone else

on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:05 pm
I heard once of a girl who lost her boyfriend in a car accident.

They were really close. She said the thing that hurts the most is wanting to tell him everything about her day,but remembering half way through dailing his number that he's not there...

Wonderful story.

windblossom said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 11:27 am
windblossom, Hyderabad, Other
0 articles 19 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The caterpillar does all the hard work, but the butterfly gets all the publicity"

Wow! This is well written! You're a very good writer! keep going!! cant wait to read more from you! :)

on Oct. 20 2009 at 5:17 pm
live.love. BRONZE, Canton, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 20 comments
wow that was sad...but oh so good! i would deffinatly read more of your work!

on Oct. 11 2009 at 1:52 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Wow!

Great detail!!!! You are a great writer!!!

Keep going!!!!


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