Helena's story

September 22, 2009
By Nonnalucero SILVER, San Bernardino, California
Nonnalucero SILVER, San Bernardino, California
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is it solveable?? is it entertaining?? does it sparkle???


I sat there, bored out my mind. I fear if the bell doesn't ring in the next second, i'd die. I let my mind wonder, to this mourning, when i found a letter on my desk. The letter was from Julian, my best friend of two years now. I've also had a crush on him ever since.
When we first met, my plan was to tell him i liked him, but i never did. Instead some gothic chick came, and i lost my nerve. I watched as they walked off holding hands, and smiling at each other. Since then i never told him, that now i love him. My excuse now would be that i don't and wont risk our friendship. Though i still dream about the way his soft lips would feel and taste like against mine.
The school bell made me jump. It was time to go home and get ready for my date with Julian. I still remember, when i walked in that mourning, i found a letter on my desk. I picked up the red envelope, and took out the letter. The letter read, "Helena, meet me at the waterfall tonight... urgent... Julian." The letter made me want to smile, because whenever we wanted to hangout, or whenever we had problems, we'd sneak out late at night and go to the waterfall. I was always there for Julian. When his father would beat him black and blue. I knew when it happened because i'd see a new bruise on his beautiful face or some where on his arms. No one knew about Julians problem but me. Every one thought Julian was getting into fights every day, but i knew the truth. The truth only made me love him even more, because it brought me closer to him then anyone else. i know about the cuts he made on his arms, and the heart shape burn on his wrist, that he hides with his green skeletal hoodie, and his fingerless gloves. i understand the pain his dad put him through, sometimes it makes my heart weep for what they do to him...
It was ten, thirty when my parents went to sleep, still i waited until eleven to be sure. When i was positive they wouldn't wake up, i climbed out my window, and made my escape. i was wearing my black Jack skeleton sweater, over a small tank top, my black skinny jeans, and my knee high combat boots.
the moon was beautiful, and full. the sky being clear, the light circle around it only made it magical. Night was a wonderful time to come to the waterfall. i thought of Julian, how his face glowed in the moonlight, how his chocolate brown eyes danced when a firefly passed by. the waterfall was like magic to me.
When i got there, i didn't see Julian anywhere. i was at the right spot, where we usually met, behind the waterfall. i stood there a second more, then decided to touch the water. it was warm, like running a warm bath. i decided i'd stick my feet in, so i unlaced my boots, set them to the side, and took off my socks. i put my feet in and sighed, "Let me be with you Julian." i took off my jacket threw it with my boots.
Then out of nowhere i get pushed into the water, with arms still around me. I knew it was Julian, i felt the tingle run through my body, when he was near. we floated to the surface, i turned to face him, he only smiled. when Julian smiles, i melt. we swam for awhile, then chased each other, when he caught me, he held me awhile. A second passed, then he kissed me. his lips were nothing like i'd imagined, they were better. his lips were like kissing a cloud, way softer, way sweeter.
"Helena, my valentine, Im glad your here with me." Julian whispered against my lips. "i will always be here for you, no one knows you like i do." i whispered back. then in unison we said, "i love you." that was the last thing we said that night. we got out the water, me in my soaked jeans, him in his, we walked hand in hand, with love in our hearts.

THE END


The author's comments:
just came to me, while being bored in math class

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on Jan. 27 2016 at 7:07 pm
Nonnalucero SILVER, San Bernardino, California
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is it solveable?? is it entertaining?? does it sparkle???

@trblue this is way late being as I recently got back into writing but I didn't understand your comment??? my story was decided how and why was it taken??? ive nvr read Ellen Hopkings before it will be my pleasure to read her books

on Jul. 23 2011 at 3:34 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

Awww! This was a perfect story!!! I LOVED IT!! <3<3<3:):):);) 

on Oct. 25 2010 at 5:13 pm
fashionlover16 SILVER, New Gloucester, Maine
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I honestly don't know what my favorite personal quote is. I can tell u what i like, if u want that. I really like the twilight series. whenever my mom suggests that we should go shopping, i light up. I love shopping. well thats about it, byez!!!!! <3

aww, so cute, i wish u would make a follow up story on this, like how u and him r doing. <3 u tim

trblue GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 10:48 am
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

over the summer i pulled some teenink stuff off the internet, and this pice of work was decided. i was trying to read my notes . so it's telling me to ask you. that you need to read all or half of ellen hopkings books.

on Feb. 20 2010 at 6:25 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

Short and sweet love it

on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:27 am
twilighter_360 GOLD, NYOB, New Jersey
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"A bird dosen't sing because it has an answer.A bird sings because it has a song." -- Maya Angelou

"Give peace a chance." --John Lennon

i luv this--its a beautiful story keep on writing!

on Oct. 13 2009 at 9:54 am
Nonnalucero SILVER, San Bernardino, California
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is it solveable?? is it entertaining?? does it sparkle???

i miss you two call katastrafic and get my new number kay?

biddycakes said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 4:10 pm
biddycakes, Charlotte, North Carolina
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wow that was really really good keep on writing!

on Oct. 5 2009 at 6:32 pm
smileysdeadvalentine GOLD, San Bernardino, California
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"you like audry hepburn,harry houdinni and croket you can't swim, you can't dance and you don't know karate face you'll never gonna make it" "i dont want to make it"

hey hun!! i miss you . this place sucks ! hows every one? tell katnix i miss her!!! im sick as dog!!! give katnix a hug for me!! i saw my old friend from pacific sunday.

love u

pndze said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 3:26 pm
That was A-mazing. I really loved it. It made me get that feeling in the pit of my stomach that I always get when something really sweet happens! And hey, maybe tomorrow I'll be sitting in math class and get an idea! Ha! Keep writing!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 10:08 am
Nonnalucero SILVER, San Bernardino, California
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is it solveable?? is it entertaining?? does it sparkle???

thanks i appreciate the encouragement... best of luck on not getting caught in class teachers can be hard, when they're encouraging us to follow our dreams... dont forget to check out Paul and Alice from my bestie

on Sep. 30 2009 at 6:56 am
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

I did and i loved them! :D

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on Sep. 30 2009 at 6:08 am
ps13795 SILVER, Baguio, Other
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It's great!!! Haha, I agree with Kaitlyn--the same thing happens to me in class although the teacher usually notices and tells me to concentrate on the lesson so I try as hard as I can to remember what I thought of afterwards! Haha.. ^_^

Anyway, I liked this! Keep it up!

P.S. I like the Blue Bloods, Vampire Kisses, and Dark Fever series too!!!

>_<

on Sep. 29 2009 at 9:51 pm
Nonnalucero SILVER, San Bernardino, California
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is it solveable?? is it entertaining?? does it sparkle???

thanks i appreciate the encouragement... all the luck in the world for your writing. dont forget to look for Paul and Alice from my bestie

on Sep. 29 2009 at 9:36 pm
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

I loved it! :) It's funny how you can be in class at school then you think of a story and you write it...in class! that's how all my stories end up. haha! Well anywayz...loved it! keep writing!

on Sep. 25 2009 at 9:58 am
Nonnalucero SILVER, San Bernardino, California
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i sorry. i wish it did happen like that... but thats why i made it your story....

on Sep. 25 2009 at 9:57 am
smileysdeadvalentine GOLD, San Bernardino, California
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"you like audry hepburn,harry houdinni and croket you can't swim, you can't dance and you don't know karate face you'll never gonna make it" "i dont want to make it"

pardon my bad grammer and happy store fun syndrome. even though real ending was tragic. the one you made makes me feel better and the what if it happened like that

H.J

on Sep. 25 2009 at 9:50 am
smileysdeadvalentine GOLD, San Bernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
"you like audry hepburn,harry houdinni and croket you can't swim, you can't dance and you don't know karate face you'll never gonna make it" "i dont want to make it"

awww!!!! its not how it really happened but thanks a lot!!!! i hope the real true life ending did not end happy.

hj


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