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First Kiss

September 5, 2009
By Anonymous

“Come closer” he says. I walk across the front porch moving lingeringly threw the summer night air. I stop to breathe it in. It fills me with an energy that crackles through my body jump-starting my heart. It beats loudly. I feel it in me as it throws itself against my chest. I feel its swelling pulse in my wrists and fingertips. I feel it in the bottom of my stomach.
I lean against the railing facing him but I can’t look at him.
“Closer.” His voice is deep and hoarse. I feel him scrutinizing me. He slides two fingers into a belt loop on either side of my hips and pulls me to him. I laugh and finally look up. He was smiling broadly down at me. He continues staring. Not wanting to be the first to look away but finding the tension unbearable i cannot help but to look down yet again. He unclasps a hand from behind my waist and lifts it to my face. As he did so it shook.

“I guess I’m more nervous than I thought I’d be” he says in that same low voice. He tilts my face towards his. His stare remains unbroken but the smile has vanished and a new intensity has overwhelmed his face. Then slowly, he kisses me.



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on Nov. 13 2009 at 10:23 am
Kauro-Dono BRONZE, Lil&#39burn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"I can't control the past, but the future only I can control."

I couldn't agree more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tgir85 GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 9:30 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

OMG!!!! its awesome!!!!! great !!!! your very descriptive!!!! I LOVE IT!!! write more!!:D

on Oct. 9 2009 at 6:28 pm
CandieApple PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
The world is a stage, and we are merely players- Shakespeare (at least it goes something like that!!)

Awesome. You pretty much just described a first kiss in just a couple paragraphs!!! I loved it! :)

jess:) said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 4:31 pm
wooooooow!!!! this was sooo good :) seriously write more!!!!!

on Sep. 24 2009 at 7:59 pm
Katie_Potatie PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
There are no regrets in my life; because there is no time for mistakes. -(ME) Katie quote

This is amazing. Wow. I loved it so much.

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 5:46 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Oh my gosh! You just made me squeel like a stereo-typed teenage girl! I loved this! Its amazing! Short and sweet but you told me so much with those few paragraphs. This is an absolute work of art. Please tell me when you start publishing because that is one book I would NOT want to miss! You are so talented! Keep writing.

God bless,

...,

BookLOver808 said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 10:22 am
It's sweet and it made me smile..

on Sep. 24 2009 at 10:05 am
This is how i want my first kiss to be!

AmnyR BRONZE said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 9:01 pm
AmnyR BRONZE, Clifton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the whole world. ~unknown

i like how short it is... short but sweet, kinda like the perfect kiss ;)

knappk said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 5:33 pm
This was a very well written story, but it is a tad bit too short, but i liked it a lot, good job.

on Sep. 23 2009 at 3:47 pm
hbeats4u2 SILVER, MPLS, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
My personal favorite quote would have to be; "Don't judge a book by its cover."

OMG!! That was so sweet!