She's a lady

August 13, 2009
By Anonymous

Whatever happened to chilvary? I thought as the bus driver pulled to a complete stop in front of the High School, I was jerked in each direction as everyone slammed off the bus.
I was the last one off, I knew I would be, I was after all the weakest link.
Stepping onto the school grounds I smiled, I had made it this far hadn't I?
Here I come, DrownWood High. I said silently in my mind and my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant.
"dude, did you kill her?" a guy said as the giant football player stood up.
A large gust of air broke through me and I gasped.
"no she's fine." the huge guy said and ran off.
I sat up my head rushing, I looked every which direction, my eyes slowly focusing.
No one seemed too be looking at me, I was a outcast after all, I blew out a sigh, then stood and brushed off, rubbing my head.
I looked over too the front doors but something caught my eye by the willow tree.
It was a guy, and he was staring at me with concern, I stared back, his eye widened slightly as if he were shocked I saw him, then a finger tapped on my shoulder.
"Are you alright,KaDee?" Vyctorea asked seriously.
I'd known Vyctorea for ten years and she was one of the most serious people I knew, I watched as she blew a strand of auburn hair out of her eyes.
"I'm fine." I said then looked over to were the boy was he still gazed over at me. "do you know who that is?"
"who?" Vyc inquired.
"Him..." I murmured pointing, she looked.
"there's no one there, KaDee." she said a eyebrow raised.
"He's right there." I argued.
"maybe you bumped your head harder then you thought." Vyc said softly.
"Calling me crazy?"
"yes."
I glared but then the bell rang and the arguement was put too a stand still.


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on Jan. 22 2010 at 1:54 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

AMAZING! That's all I have to say. Oh, and that I want more.

on Jan. 3 2010 at 3:55 pm
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face"
"no one ever drown in their own sweat"

wow who ever wrote this i want to read something else you wrote it was great :0)

on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:39 pm
justbreathe.... BRONZE, N/a, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how bad things get, there is always something that you don\'t know about just yet.

I love it! It really draws me in. I am literally like excited about this piece! But I agree it is too short, mostly because I want more. Why don't you write more? Maybe about a romance with this boy who supposedly isn't there. And he could be very chivalrous.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:37 pm
justbreathe.... BRONZE, N/a, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how bad things get, there is always something that you don\'t know about just yet.

It's very well written and appealing. I love it! But I agree that it's too short, mostly because I want more. Write more, maybe about a romance with this boy who supposedly isn't there.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 9:36 am
G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decide to see beyond the imperfections.

She's a Lady part two:
http ://www.teenink .com /fiction/romance/article/132354/Shes-A-Lady-part-two/
She's a Lady part 3:
http ://www.teenink .com /fiction/romance/article/145299/Shes-a-lady-part-three/?page=1

smart4life said...
on Dec. 9 2009 at 12:05 pm
It's sort of too short. and not romantic

on Oct. 26 2009 at 1:07 pm
phoenixqueen GOLD, Idaho Falls, Idaho
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"I cannot live without books."

it is chivalry, not chilvary. I'm sorry, I just had to point that out. Sometimes I can't look past spelling errors.

on Oct. 3 2009 at 11:40 am
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison

lol dont be sorry, i do have my eyes peeled tho. thx =)

BreeLee BRONZE said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:55 am
BreeLee BRONZE, Springdale, Arkansas
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I'm the writer. ;P I've already posted Shes a Lady part two. You'll just have too find it sorry

on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:32 am
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end." ~Me

Yes, write more. There are a lot of grammatical errors which might be fixed but I loved it!

on Oct. 2 2009 at 6:08 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison

i agree, please write more it ended to soon

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:10 am
AmandaLee143 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Always Believe :)

wow !! i loved it !! :) great idea

Bookaddict said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 5:15 pm
I love this idea!! PLEASE write more!

Second52 said...
on Sep. 7 2009 at 8:22 pm
woow i love it :))) cn u write more please!!!

BreeLee BRONZE said...
on Sep. 7 2009 at 1:58 pm
BreeLee BRONZE, Springdale, Arkansas
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Don't worry I posted number two of this there's more

on Sep. 6 2009 at 10:24 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
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"Forgive and Forget and Never Regret."~A old friend

wow loved it! you need to write more!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 1:27 pm
Okaaaay, so, I loved this. :) It's too short, though! You should write some more. And I was pretty shocked at the ending. "....my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant." I laughed really hard at that part. Haha.

on Sep. 4 2009 at 4:55 am
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

you should totally make this into a full story or something. i love it!

on Sep. 2 2009 at 10:18 pm
BellaLuna1 BRONZE, Ozone Park, New York
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wow. i liked it u got me hooked writting anything more to this? like the spelling of vyctoria to that was cool!


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