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She's a lady

By , Springdale, AR
Whatever happened to chilvary? I thought as the bus driver pulled to a complete stop in front of the High School, I was jerked in each direction as everyone slammed off the bus.
I was the last one off, I knew I would be, I was after all the weakest link.
Stepping onto the school grounds I smiled, I had made it this far hadn't I?
Here I come, DrownWood High. I said silently in my mind and my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant.
"dude, did you kill her?" a guy said as the giant football player stood up.
A large gust of air broke through me and I gasped.
"no she's fine." the huge guy said and ran off.
I sat up my head rushing, I looked every which direction, my eyes slowly focusing.
No one seemed too be looking at me, I was a outcast after all, I blew out a sigh, then stood and brushed off, rubbing my head.
I looked over too the front doors but something caught my eye by the willow tree.
It was a guy, and he was staring at me with concern, I stared back, his eye widened slightly as if he were shocked I saw him, then a finger tapped on my shoulder.
"Are you alright,KaDee?" Vyctorea asked seriously.
I'd known Vyctorea for ten years and she was one of the most serious people I knew, I watched as she blew a strand of auburn hair out of her eyes.
"I'm fine." I said then looked over to were the boy was he still gazed over at me. "do you know who that is?"
"who?" Vyc inquired.
"Him..." I murmured pointing, she looked.
"there's no one there, KaDee." she said a eyebrow raised.
"He's right there." I argued.
"maybe you bumped your head harder then you thought." Vyc said softly.
"Calling me crazy?"
"yes."
I glared but then the bell rang and the arguement was put too a stand still.




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swim4ever said...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 3:55 pm:
wow who ever wrote this i want to read something else you wrote it was great :0)
 
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writergirl914 said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 12:39 pm:
I love it! It really draws me in. I am literally like excited about this piece! But I agree it is too short, mostly because I want more. Why don't you write more? Maybe about a romance with this boy who supposedly isn't there. And he could be very chivalrous.
 
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writergirl914 said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 12:37 pm:
It's very well written and appealing. I love it! But I agree that it's too short, mostly because I want more. Write more, maybe about a romance with this boy who supposedly isn't there.
 
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marie95 said...
Dec. 31, 2009 at 9:36 am:
She's a Lady part two: http ://www.teenink .com /fiction/romance/article/132354/Shes-A-Lady-part-two/ She's a Lady part 3: http ://www.teenink .com /fiction/romance/article/145299/Shes-a-lady-part-three/?page=1
 
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smart4life said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 12:05 pm:
It's sort of too short. and not romantic
 
ninjaturtle replied...
May 12, 2010 at 5:23 pm :
you are so right!  I really didn't get the point of this.
 
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phoenixqueen said...
Oct. 26, 2009 at 1:07 pm:
it is chivalry, not chilvary. I'm sorry, I just had to point that out. Sometimes I can't look past spelling errors.
 
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Fredwardness said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 6:08 pm:
i agree, please write more it ended to soon
 
Breeahnnah G. replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 8:55 am :
I'm the writer. ;P I've already posted Shes a Lady part two. You'll just have too find it sorry
 
Fredwardness replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 11:40 am :
lol dont be sorry, i do have my eyes peeled tho. thx =)
 
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AmandaLee143 said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:10 am:
wow !! i loved it !! :) great idea
 
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Bookaddict said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 5:15 pm:
I love this idea!! PLEASE write more!
 
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Second52 said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 8:22 pm:
woow i love it :))) cn u write more please!!!
 
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booksarelife4me said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 10:24 pm:
wow loved it! you need to write more!
 
SilverAngel replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 8:32 am :
Yes, write more. There are a lot of grammatical errors which might be fixed but I loved it!
 
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SallySunshine said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 1:27 pm:
Okaaaay, so, I loved this. :) It's too short, though! You should write some more. And I was pretty shocked at the ending. "....my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant." I laughed really hard at that part. Haha.
 
Breeahnnah G. replied...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 1:58 pm :
Don't worry I posted number two of this there's more
 
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So-calledLife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 4:55 am:
you should totally make this into a full story or something. i love it!
 
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BellaLuna said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 10:18 pm:
wow. i liked it u got me hooked writting anything more to this? like the spelling of vyctoria to that was cool!
 
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