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She's a lady

August 13, 2009
By Anonymous

Whatever happened to chilvary? I thought as the bus driver pulled to a complete stop in front of the High School, I was jerked in each direction as everyone slammed off the bus.
I was the last one off, I knew I would be, I was after all the weakest link.
Stepping onto the school grounds I smiled, I had made it this far hadn't I?
Here I come, DrownWood High. I said silently in my mind and my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant.
"dude, did you kill her?" a guy said as the giant football player stood up.
A large gust of air broke through me and I gasped.
"no she's fine." the huge guy said and ran off.
I sat up my head rushing, I looked every which direction, my eyes slowly focusing.
No one seemed too be looking at me, I was a outcast after all, I blew out a sigh, then stood and brushed off, rubbing my head.
I looked over too the front doors but something caught my eye by the willow tree.
It was a guy, and he was staring at me with concern, I stared back, his eye widened slightly as if he were shocked I saw him, then a finger tapped on my shoulder.
"Are you alright,KaDee?" Vyctorea asked seriously.
I'd known Vyctorea for ten years and she was one of the most serious people I knew, I watched as she blew a strand of auburn hair out of her eyes.
"I'm fine." I said then looked over to were the boy was he still gazed over at me. "do you know who that is?"
"who?" Vyc inquired.
"Him..." I murmured pointing, she looked.
"there's no one there, KaDee." she said a eyebrow raised.
"He's right there." I argued.
"maybe you bumped your head harder then you thought." Vyc said softly.
"Calling me crazy?"
"yes."
I glared but then the bell rang and the arguement was put too a stand still.


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on May. 12 2010 at 12:05 am
weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Done & Over"

"Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength."

"People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth."

OH NO!! the story ran out of words!!!!! WRITE MORE PLZ!!! :)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 4:28 pm
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

-Robert Frost

I think everyone is saying the same thing.... lol. this is just a really good piece.

on Apr. 20 2010 at 11:42 pm
CanYouSeeTheCrazy PLATINUM, Cle Elum, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I know why everyone in this world is so desperate to find love."
"Oh yeah? Why then?"
"Because, it's the closest thing we have to magic."

citydancer just read my mind. so interesting so immediately, i want to hear more! =]

on Apr. 20 2010 at 9:21 pm
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
21 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

-Robert Frost

please please continue it!!!! you've got me wanting more!!!!really good start. keep it up! i want to know what happens next!

on Apr. 20 2010 at 8:41 pm
Oh my gosh I know. The 'too's bothered me sooo much. Hahaha I'm so technical when it comes to spelling and grammar. I didn't exactly love this story..certainly doesn't deserve #1...I don't even get it! ;P

on Apr. 20 2010 at 7:44 pm
Lovejunkie123, East Meadow, New York
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Hear the rest so please cont. it

on Apr. 20 2010 at 7:43 pm
Lovejunkie123, East Meadow, New York
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I loved it but i want to haer the reat please cont. it

SageSin GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 8:40 am
SageSin GOLD, Oaklawn, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Accept everything about yourself. I mean everything. You are you, and that is the beginning and the end; No apologies, no regrets."

BEAUTIFUL!

on Mar. 29 2010 at 5:59 pm
CardinalRunner BRONZE, Holland, Michigan
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Agreed, the "too's" bothered me so much when its supposed to be "to." I dont really understand this I think t couldve been way better..

on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:35 pm
ClockworkLightbulb SILVER, Nottingham, Other
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Number. * :)

on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:34 pm
ClockworkLightbulb SILVER, Nottingham, Other
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No offence but I dont really get why this is nubmer one.

There are a lot of spelling mistakes and the story itself seems pointless?


on Mar. 29 2010 at 3:44 pm
MusicIsLife013 SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Light, like the flutter of wings, feel your hollow voice rushing into me
As you're longing to sing" -AFI

"Here we go again, I kinda wanna be more than friends, so take it easy on me I'm afraid you're never satisfied." -Neon Trees

they was really good! :)  please check out some of my work

on Mar. 29 2010 at 1:42 pm
HeyAmanda SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
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it was good and i liked how you made the spelling different but i kinda dont like the end cuz it makes it seem like a sci fi not romance and i  don't think the title fits

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on Mar. 29 2010 at 3:43 am
hepburn, Assd, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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thanks for the links :)

TheObvious said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 7:36 am
well...there were a number of spelling and grammatical errors that you did overlook. im sorry, sometimes i just cant look past hypocrisy.

on Mar. 7 2010 at 1:53 pm
imnotjaye SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
"We live in an age when unnecessary things are our only necessities."
Oscar Wilde
Irish dramatist, novelist, & poet (1854 - 1900)

i rly liked it... but the title dosent rly suit it well

on Mar. 7 2010 at 10:29 am
adigitaldreamer2 BRONZE, Vienna, West Virginia
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It's a nice start, and I like it. But maybe something a little more creative would do you some good. I like your style and were real creative on the names. I like that. Don't stop writing! :) God Bless

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on Feb. 21 2010 at 4:03 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

This is amazing I'd love to hear more!

on Jan. 28 2010 at 2:31 pm
BrittneyCloud SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Dont tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon!"

OMG is there a second part to this? i would love to read more

on Jan. 22 2010 at 3:38 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

ooo i really like this. its kinda like a mystery. i agree wit little-miss-sunshine. want more! ;)