She's a lady

August 13, 2009
By , Springdale, AR
Whatever happened to chilvary? I thought as the bus driver pulled to a complete stop in front of the High School, I was jerked in each direction as everyone slammed off the bus.
I was the last one off, I knew I would be, I was after all the weakest link.
Stepping onto the school grounds I smiled, I had made it this far hadn't I?
Here I come, DrownWood High. I said silently in my mind and my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant.
"dude, did you kill her?" a guy said as the giant football player stood up.
A large gust of air broke through me and I gasped.
"no she's fine." the huge guy said and ran off.
I sat up my head rushing, I looked every which direction, my eyes slowly focusing.
No one seemed too be looking at me, I was a outcast after all, I blew out a sigh, then stood and brushed off, rubbing my head.
I looked over too the front doors but something caught my eye by the willow tree.
It was a guy, and he was staring at me with concern, I stared back, his eye widened slightly as if he were shocked I saw him, then a finger tapped on my shoulder.
"Are you alright,KaDee?" Vyctorea asked seriously.
I'd known Vyctorea for ten years and she was one of the most serious people I knew, I watched as she blew a strand of auburn hair out of her eyes.
"I'm fine." I said then looked over to were the boy was he still gazed over at me. "do you know who that is?"
"who?" Vyc inquired.
"Him..." I murmured pointing, she looked.
"there's no one there, KaDee." she said a eyebrow raised.
"He's right there." I argued.
"maybe you bumped your head harder then you thought." Vyc said softly.
"Calling me crazy?"
I glared but then the bell rang and the arguement was put too a stand still.

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citydancer94 said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 9:21 pm
please please continue it!!!! you've got me wanting more!!!!really good start. keep it up! i want to know what happens next!
soccercrazy replied...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 11:42 pm
citydancer just read my mind. so interesting so immediately, i want to hear more! =]
citydancer94 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 4:28 pm
I think everyone is saying the same thing.... lol. this is just a really good piece.
Lovejunkie123 said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 7:43 pm
I loved it but i want to haer the reat please cont. it
Lovejunkie123 replied...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 7:44 pm
Hear the rest so please cont. it
SageSin said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 8:40 am
ClockworkLightbulb said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 4:34 pm

No offence but I dont really get why this is nubmer one.

There are a lot of spelling mistakes and the story itself seems pointless?

ClockworkLightbulb replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 4:35 pm
Number. * :)
Angie.O replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 5:59 pm
Agreed, the "too's" bothered me so much when its supposed to be "to." I dont really understand this I think t couldve been way better..
babygirlcryin replied...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 8:41 pm
Oh my gosh I know. The 'too's bothered me sooo much. Hahaha I'm so technical when it comes to spelling and grammar. I didn't exactly love this story..certainly doesn't deserve #1...I don't even get it! ;P
MusicIsLife013 said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 3:44 pm
they was really good! :)  please check out some of my work
amtpinkpanda This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 1:42 pm
it was good and i liked how you made the spelling different but i kinda dont like the end cuz it makes it seem like a sci fi not romance and i  don't think the title fits
hepburn said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 3:43 am
thanks for the links :)
TheObvious said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 7:36 am
well...there were a number of spelling and grammatical errors that you did overlook. im sorry, sometimes i just cant look past hypocrisy.
imnotjaye said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 1:53 pm
i rly liked it... but the title dosent rly suit it well
Lauryn D. said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 10:29 am
It's a nice start, and I like it. But maybe something a little more creative would do you some good. I like your style and were real creative on the names. I like that. Don't stop writing! :) God Bless
Ally25 said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 4:03 pm
This is amazing I'd love to hear more!
Bbrat said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 2:31 pm
OMG is there a second part to this? i would love to read more
bamboom212 said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 3:38 pm
ooo i really like this. its kinda like a mystery. i agree wit little-miss-sunshine. want more! ;)
little-miss-sunshine said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 1:54 pm
AMAZING! That's all I have to say. Oh, and that I want more.
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