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Love On the Rocks

August 25, 2009
By Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments

"And cut!" Shouted the director. "That's a wrap! Good job today, but you can all be better! So go home, practice, and rest! I'll see you all bright and early tomorrow for the first show!"

Packing up her bag, Melinda glanced around the room.

"Where is he?" she whispered to herself. "He told me he'd meet me here after rehearsal."

Stuffing her last ballet slipper into her duffel bag, Melinda swung it over her shoulder and began out of the auditorium.

"I can't believe he did this to me again," she thought to herself as she let the door skip closed on its own.
• ~ •

"Hey! How was your day?" Drew's computer chirped as his message was sent.

Melinda glided her mouse over to the small red box on the top of the chat window that had just appeared.

Waiting a few minutes before resending his message, Drew glanced at his buddy list. Scrolling down to xxgottaluvmexx he double clicked and started typing; momentarily forgetting about midgetmelinda.

"Hey Courtney! You were amazing in rehearsal today!" he chirped over to xxgottaluvmexx. Then realizing he hadn't received a reply from Melinda, he scrolled back to the top of his buddy list and double clicked on her name.

"Melinda?" he sent.

With a deep sigh, Melinda clicked on the chat window from XlovemedeadX.

"What the hell do you want??" She typed into the small box, but before hitting the return key to send it, she thought better of it and deleted her message.

"Hi." She decided to send instead.
•••••

"Oh hey Drew! Thanks! You were great too!" Drew's computer pinged in, as Courtney replied.

"Not nearly as great as you! But thanks anyways!" He argued as he chirped back. Talking to Melinda and Courtney at the same time was challenging but being that he could sense the tension with Melinda, he decided to focus on talking to Courtney instead.

"Haha I'm not really up for arguing with you Drew," Courtney laughed as she typed.

"Good! Then I win by forgeit! =]" Drew gloated.

"haha surreee I guess so. lol so how are you?" She asked, trying to change the subject.

"I'm good thanks!" Drew replied with a glance over at Melinda's chat. "How are you?"

"I'm pretty good. Just tired I guess." Courtney hinted.

"Oh...are you sure? Do you want to talk about it? I'm here for you," stated Drew sincerely, holding his breath while waiting for her answer.

"Oh, no thanks...umm it's a long story. I'm fine. Besides - isn't Melinda on? You should talk to her... I'm getting off anyways. Thanks tho!" Drew's computer pings again, his heart falling as he read her message.

"No problem! I'm always here for you Courtney! But have a good night! I'll see you tomorrow at the show!"

"Right! Okay, thanks. You too. See you then! Night Drew." Courtney's computer chirped as she sent her good-bye.

"Good-night Courtney."

Saving the chat, Drew closed the window and opened up Melinda's again, her "Hi." still waiting for a reply.
•••••

"Hey! How was your day?" he enthusiastically typed.

"Just dandy." Melinda chirped.

"That's great! Right?" Drew bubbled.

"Not really-" she sent, starting to type why; Drew decided to reply first - not acknowledging her message.

"My day was great! We had a sub in english and we watched a movie in history. Then we had rehearsal, but after rehearsal Dillon, Charlie, Jeff, Sarah, John, Mary, and I went to get ice cream. It was HILARIOUS!" Melinda read, deleting the message she had planned on sending him.

"Good for you." She sends, hoping to get her point across.

"I know right?! I had a blast! You should have come!" Drew continued to bubble into his chat.

"I wasn't invited." Melinda sent blatantly, closing the window hoping that he'd just shut up for once.

"Well it was great!" popped up Drew's screen name, XlovemedeadX. "Anywayssss," he prolonged. "I'm gunna go. ttyl!" his chat chirped on Melinda's screen. Before she could reply to say "bye," a message popped up in faint grey lettering.

"This user is currently offline," it read.

Fan-freakin-tastic she thought to herself.


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Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 5:46 am
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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Thank you! Don't forget to vote, please! ^_^

on Oct. 12 2010 at 9:10 pm
spaghetti15 BRONZE, Harlingen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"A true friend stabs you in the front."-Oscar Wilde

at first i was like, o.O whats going on?! D: then i was like, ohhhh!

it was really good and SERIOUSLY relatable...v.v which sucks that guys are like that, but anyway great job! :)


Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 9:10 am
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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thanks!

may I ask what was confusing? So I know for future purposes?


on Aug. 19 2010 at 9:43 pm
HippieNamedAnna PLATINUM, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Let It Be-The Beatles
Music is the only thing that makes sense any more-Me
Make love, not war-a bunch of people
Roses are red, Violets are blue, I have five fingers, The middle one's for you-Me :)

kinda confusing at first, but it was still great!

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 5:13 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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aww thanks! I will check yours out :)

 

haha  I agree!


on Aug. 19 2010 at 4:01 pm
DayofRain50 GOLD, Robbinsville, New Jersey
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Please look at my work! Thank you if you look and thank you for writing this. It's totally relatable.

on Aug. 19 2010 at 3:59 pm
DayofRain50 GOLD, Robbinsville, New Jersey
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Wow. I hope I never meet a guy like a Drew. This was a great piece of writing and it was annoyingly realistic. (annoyingly as in it's irritating this type of stuff actually happens)

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 4:05 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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haha I will! :) I'm working on another story similar to this actually :)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 1:05 am
write more plz PLZ PLZ!!!!

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 3:58 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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haha thank you! I was going for realistic :)

on Jul. 22 2010 at 10:30 am
YellowStar24 BRONZE, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
no worries, its all good

really good! i can totaly relate! very realistic plot! lov it!

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 8:27 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments
Anytime :)

on Jun. 14 2010 at 8:25 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

You're welcome, and thank you for looking at my work:)

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 5:05 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Thank you :)

I will, as well as others I hope, check out some of your work and leave some feedback :)

Thanks again!

-Nikki


on Jun. 14 2010 at 1:23 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

I love it!  Very modern, very funny. Great job!

Btw, anyone who sees this, will you check out my work and comment on it?


Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 7:19 am
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Aww thank you!

I'd love to :)


on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:16 pm
JamieStarr GOLD, Sevierville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
o! thats why i love you. :) i love you.

this was really good it was very vivid. i was wondering i just started writing this kind of stuff and i dont know if i am any good and just by reading this you are really good. do you think that you can look at some of my writing PLEASE and tell me if i am any good or not.

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 1:08 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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 Some guys just don't know how to appreciate what they have I guess..

Thank you :) a second part? hmm, I could try that :) I'll let you know if I post one :)


chocoholicks said...
on May. 23 2010 at 1:05 pm
this wuz so good! y wuz drew such a jerk? write a second part plz!!!! this drew me in and i couldn't stop! great work!

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on May. 23 2010 at 9:15 am
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments
Thank you! It means a lot :)