Him

August 15, 2009
By TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
14 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't remember it clearly, but it went something like this:

"The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present."


Down the stairs I go to see who was waiting for me. It was the person I was hoping to see all day. He had a smile on his face, but in his eyes, there was sadness. I ran downstairs to give him a hug. I kissed him on the lips and whispered in his ear that I missed him. He pushed me away and told me to sit. I did just that, but I couldn't belive what he told me. He told me that he was in love with another woman. I told him that I never wanted to see him again. I went upstairs to call my friend to tell her that he got another girlfriend. All night I cried.
Suddenly, I was awoken by a phone call. It was one of my friends. "How are ou feeling" She asked. "I am fine" I say.
Four months later I found someone that would love me forever. :)


The author's comments:
I hope you like it! Feel free to comment:)

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 13 comments.


on Aug. 10 2011 at 1:41 am
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
14 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't remember it clearly, but it went something like this:

"The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present."

Lol. <3

on Aug. 10 2011 at 1:40 am
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
14 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't remember it clearly, but it went something like this:

"The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present."

lol, yeah I agree. I was stuck on this but one of my friends really wanted me to post it, so I did. I'm way better at poems then I am with stories. Feel free to check out some of my poems. :)

on Mar. 28 2011 at 6:59 pm
ditto                

on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:24 pm
Haley_Elizabeth GOLD, Wallingford, Vermont
12 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Embrace imperfection rather than hide your flaws."

Um, it's honestly really not the greatest. It was very confusing and short, it sounded more like a summary of a page in a book you read. It was unoriginal, not to sound mean. Really the ending was the worst part. It would have been a whole lot better if you continued with getting over this guy and then finding someone else, someone better, and then writing about their new relationship. 

on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:36 pm
readergirl95 BRONZE, Hopedale, Illinois
3 articles 1 photo 24 comments
Umm, kind of confused. wish you had added more detail since it was such a good story

on Jul. 15 2010 at 1:52 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

it was nice but i wish there was more... cool

iwantcoconow said...
on Dec. 7 2009 at 7:37 pm
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
0 articles 0 photos 81 comments
thanks i really like chocolate

lexi<3 GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 1:27 pm
lexi<3 GOLD, Spaulding, South Dakota
15 articles 7 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

dude, i loved ur story bkuz it is really amazingg, but i put thsi comment down here to say that this persons screen name that i'm replying on is awesome!!! sweet idea!!!

on Oct. 25 2009 at 9:23 pm
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
14 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't remember it clearly, but it went something like this:

"The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present."

Wow! What an imagination! I like the ideas. I'll think about it :)

on Oct. 24 2009 at 2:54 pm
HannahBear! BRONZE, Lake Wylie, South Carolina
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
The way a team plays as a whole determines its success. You may have the greatest bunch of individual stars in the world, but if they don't play together, the club won't be worth a dime...-Babe Ruth

You should add more about the person who would love you forever, and maybe the one who said he loved another woman got desperate and came back to you but the love of your life defended you when the player got drunk or something like that?

on Sep. 26 2009 at 12:43 pm
TheUnknownGuest GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
14 articles 4 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can't remember it clearly, but it went something like this:

"The past is the past, the future is the furture. But now, now is like a gift, which is why it is called present."

aww. Thanks! I felt the same way.... but I don't know what else to add!

on Sep. 26 2009 at 12:24 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

good, but i think u need a little more to add to your story, i mean i wish there was more, but other than that, I LOVED IT!

iwantcoconow said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 10:41 am
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
0 articles 0 photos 81 comments
really good i love that it ended on a happy note


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!