When there was just you and me

June 14, 2009
By writersara BRONZE, Hilliard, Ohio
writersara BRONZE, Hilliard, Ohio
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There was that time. That time when I could feel your breath skim across my face and I knew you were just as content to stay there as me.
In those few classes we would stare at each other and the room would suddenly fade from around us. Your smile would send my heart fluttering higher and higher than ever before.
Blackness. The world surrounding my vision and my heart, but with few pinpoints of light keeping me from plunging into the endless depths. To the point where a person can become consumed.
So is it wrong for me to mourn the seperating of our time? I think not. For you were the one thing that made me feel my existince feel alright.

The author's comments:
This is a little something I wrote that is very close to my heart. Since it was off the top of my head I didn't go much into the depths, but hopefully you will all like that.

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on Dec. 4 2009 at 3:05 pm
Brilliantbecca SILVER, Clayton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"A best friend is someone whom laughs three times at a joke; once when it's told, once when you explain it and five minutes later when they finally get it."

That was really good. it was simple and i want more! Keep up the good writing.

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