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June 22, 2009
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.


We were circled around the bonfire that took julie about twenty minutes to make.
"Norene," she picked, "truth or dare?"
I really didnt want to go because joey was there and he was sitting right next to me, and i knew what she was going to ask me.
I took a deep breath, "Truth."
"Do you really like Joey D.? and, how much?" she asked, everyone went "OOOOOOH"
"Yes," i confessed, "a lot."
I peeked over.
He was smiling.
It was my turn.
"Joey, truth or dare," he raised his eyebrows in surprise.
"Truth," he smiled.
"Who do you like?" i said, his smile faded into an expression of fear and embarrassment.
His face was turning red and he looked away from me.
"No.. way!" i said, wide eyed.
He nodded his head.
I laughed, "Joey come on its not that bad."
He looked up.
Mostly everyone was smiling.
"Finally!" Tegan yells from across the fire, "I told you if you told her she would accept it!"
He rolled his eyes.
She laughed.
"Really?" i whispered.
"Really," he whispered in my ear. I shivered .
He chuckled, "You okay?"
"I'm...not...really...sure." i said slowly.
He laughed.
"What are you laughing about?" Joe asked.
"Nothing," Joey said, "Mind your own business."
He looked away and began the game again, "John, truth or dare?"


The author's comments:
i added my crushes name and some other people at my school. No my name is NOT sally my mom made me say my name is sally. It's really Norene. This never actually happened obviously. I wish it would though...

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on Apr. 30 2011 at 9:35 pm
Livvyluv203 SILVER, St. Clair Shore, Michigan
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i love this so much! :)

on May. 18 2010 at 5:56 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

lol okay tegan XD

on May. 17 2010 at 6:17 pm
wicked-crazy SILVER, Henderson, Minnesota
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"If you wait to do things until you know they're right, you'll probably never do much of anything." ~Win Borden

I know...I just needed to point out that I was in this epic story.

on May. 16 2010 at 5:50 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

lol yeah this is the one you begged me to email to you that one time XD

on May. 13 2010 at 7:58 pm
wicked-crazy SILVER, Henderson, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"If you wait to do things until you know they're right, you'll probably never do much of anything." ~Win Borden

I'm in this story?! ha, that is epic. Loved it!

on Jul. 13 2009 at 6:41 pm
unearthlyhaphazard GOLD, N/A, New York
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"There are three rules for writing the novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are."~W. Somerset Maugham

Very sweet! I liked how you used the game of "Truth or Dare" to reveal who you both liked. It's not some elaborate even that would most likely never happen in real life; it's how normal kids would probably do things. Like Zero_Kiryu said, it's fiction, so it doesn't matter if you like the guy or not. Nice job!!!

on Jul. 12 2009 at 7:13 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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Oo, this is nice I liked it!

on Jul. 8 2009 at 2:19 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Yeah. It's just sad that i put his name in it. I should've changed it! Okay just so you know my new user name is His-Bright-Green-Eyes. Joey didn't have green eyes. His eyes were blue....

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on Jul. 7 2009 at 4:54 pm
Lynette BRONZE, Rio Grande, Texas
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“Love is when the other person's happiness is more important than your own.”
H. Jackson Brown,Jr.

Its really a nice story...it really doesn't matter if you don't like him anymore

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 4 2009 at 11:38 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Well I think it's cute. <(o.0)> Even if you don't like the guy anymore it IS in the fiction section, so if it doesn't apply to you any more it doesn't lose it's value.

ZERO

on Jul. 1 2009 at 2:17 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

hate this story now. I dont like him anymore! Kind of sad really. I liked him for a whole year and a half!




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