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The sunset

By , marquette, MI
We were lying on the beach on a soft green beach blanket, the wind was blowing and so was my hair. I could hear the roaring of the waves on the shore and it was a romantic sweet sound that couldn't measure to the sound of his voice whispering in my ear, "I Love you". I was filled with butterflies running through my body and all around me. I looked back at him and said "I love you too."
It was at that moment that I knew it was true, I loved him and he was all I wanted. he kissed me gently and I was just thrilled and I was in love. the sun started to go down on another perfect summer night and I wasn't ready to let go of another night. school was coming close and so was the romance. He scooped me up in his arms and carried me to house and he kissed me good-night and then I went in side and ran to my room and all night I dreamt of him...





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tgir85 said...
Jul. 14, 2009 at 2:59 am
its nice....needs more description though.more feeling...
but over all its good i can give u tips if u want..
 
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