More than a Dream

June 11, 2009
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The wind blew steadily through the trees naked branches. The moon was bright illuminating our way down a narrow path. A single brown strand of my hair brushed my frozen cheek. We stopped in silence my hand held safely in his as a hundred flowers came into view.

My heart threatened to burst out of my chest. Instinctively, my hand tightened around his and I blinked back tears of ultimate happiness. His eyes met mine making my face burst with emotion.

“How’d you get all these in fall?” I laughed embracing him tightly as I nodded my head towards the flowers.

He pulled me back and smiled. His eyes twinkled a million responses…” I love you.”

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dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 2:17 am
great job! and i love the idea you got from a dream and used it in writing. i liked this dream :) good job! check out some of my work :)
sallyloco said...
Jun. 23, 2009 at 2:41 pm
Simply BEAUTIFUL! i wish i had dreams like that. Mine are more like being chased by an evil TV remote and i wake up remembering i forgot to turn off my TV! lol. THanks for commenting on my work!
Jessie<3 said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 7:53 pm
thats amazing i wish i had dreams as good as this one! and thanx 4 the comments on my work!!!
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