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Avery stares at him in silence. Under the problem answers, is another drawing. This one is clearly of her, with the pale skin, and slightly ratty hair that Avery had today. The shirt, hair, eyes, and everything else was clearly her. Eli realized that she was looking at the picture and pulled it away, his face turning red.



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elycavillThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1 at 3:38 pm
I like the idea, and this line *Under the problem answers is another drawing.* it sounds as if it has another message , not only the physical description of the situation. And I love the name for the character 'Eli' :PP Nice :)
 
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