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Me.Myself.And Hypocrites.

May 22, 2013
By KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
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KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
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"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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I twitch and jerk,ferociously pulling and scratching my own skin while staring at the adnormal being that is myself in the mirror.I just stand there,staring at all the scars and scabs healing over.I remember when I used to preen my hair and clothes,how I used to actually care what I looked like.I used to make sure everything was perfect,but I don't care about any of it now.Now I just fixate myself on hiding from people's glares and stares and ignoring them to the best of my ability.They don't want to see me,they just stare at me in disgust.No one wants to totally acknowledge my existance and I don't blame them.They only see me by what their parents see me as anyways;They see me as a sociopath,or a freak.They can whisper these horrible names and gossip them among the peers all they want.They're just hypocrites.All of them.

© Heather W., No., Brunswick, NJ

The author's comments:
I wrote this during class for a timed essay.Our goal was to use these 5 certain vocabulary words and put them into a paragraph that made sense.My teacher graded and it commented at the top of my paper, "Wow!"
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KodaFarone SILVER said...
on May. 31 2013 at 8:51 pm
KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
6 articles 4 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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Thank you :3
BookNerd35 GOLD said...
on May. 31 2013 at 4:27 pm
BookNerd35 GOLD, Herod, Illinois
10 articles 1 photo 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are so many people out there who will tell you that you can't. What you've got to do is turn around and say, 'watch me.' -unknown

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Awesome Koda! Extremely relatable!
KodaFarone SILVER said...
on May. 28 2013 at 10:34 pm
KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
6 articles 4 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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:O Thank you!
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on May. 28 2013 at 10:28 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

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“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

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Well I can definitely relate to this, like others have said. But I also felt like at the end you turned the emotion outwards instead of directing the anger inside. Like a shift xD good job! Love it :)
KodaFarone SILVER said...
on May. 27 2013 at 4:42 pm
KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
6 articles 4 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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One of my best friends reminds me alll the time on how my articles seem to be so relatable,not just to herself,but to other people who might connect to it.Thanks!
AndiFace SILVER said...
on May. 27 2013 at 1:35 pm
AndiFace SILVER, Selah, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

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"To crave for happiness in this world is simply to be possessed by a spirit of revolt." - Henrik Ibsen

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This is so relatable
RoyalCorona SILVER said...
on May. 26 2013 at 11:21 am
RoyalCorona SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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All of us fave failed to match our dream of perfection. I rate us on the basis of our splendid failure to do the impossible. -William Faulkner

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Another great jewel from Miss. Koda Farone! I swear, this should be the anthem for every teenage girl in the world! If only someone could create a song out of it and then it would be!