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How She Just Seems.

May 22, 2013
By KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
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KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
6 articles 4 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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I think she has O.C.D because she acts as if the whole world is filthy and not clean enough to her liking,or something like that.Maybe she just has problems at home and she uses her obsession with cleanliness as an outlet.She also does this weird muttering thing when she's alone,like she's talking to herself because she has no one else to help her with,well,life.Teachers practically push the poor girl towards what they assume is help like the superintendent and the counselors,but she ignores them all and moves on.Sometimes,on really bad days,she'll sit in the very back of the class to whimper and cry to herself quietly,but I still notice her.On other days,she'll be in somewhat a better mood because I notice how she'll snort like she's annoyed when people use adjectives like "glorious" or "beautiful".Maybe it's because no one has ever used those words to compliment her.Maybe she just needs someone.

© Dat L., Worcester, MA

The author's comments:
This was a timed paper that I had to write in my 2nd hour English class.The goal was to include a certain 5 vocabulary words into a paragraph that made sense.It made my teacher and half the class tear up and was in a sad shock.Lol whoops.
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KodaFarone SILVER said...
on May. 31 2013 at 8:50 pm
KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
6 articles 4 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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Look who finally found me!! Lol thanks
BookNerd35 GOLD said...
on May. 31 2013 at 4:25 pm
BookNerd35 GOLD, Herod, Illinois
10 articles 1 photo 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are so many people out there who will tell you that you can't. What you've got to do is turn around and say, 'watch me.' -unknown

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Good Job Koda!
KodaFarone SILVER said...
on May. 29 2013 at 12:44 pm
KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
6 articles 4 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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Thank you :3
KodaFarone SILVER said...
on May. 28 2013 at 3:02 pm
KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
6 articles 4 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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Thank you! I just had to read this comment outloud to my mum Lol.
MaggieLager_ BRONZE said...
on May. 28 2013 at 7:15 am
MaggieLager_ BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Love is like a big juicy steak. You bite into it, enjoy it, then regret the calories you gained, when you're standin on your scale the next morning.

See,I don't eat steak. I'm a vegetarian.”
― Euphoria Godsent

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I wish I could write something that powerful to read out loud in my writing class. This is great, good job. c:
KodaFarone SILVER said...
on May. 27 2013 at 4:39 pm
KodaFarone SILVER, Rosiclare, Illinois
6 articles 4 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're a little weird and life's a little weird,and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours,we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness called Love."-Dr.Seuss

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Thanks! Your comment reminded me of Perks of Being a Wallflower because they observe,they understand,and they stay quiet and I realise how this kinda connects to my article.Whoa.Lol
AndiFace SILVER said...
on May. 27 2013 at 1:40 pm
AndiFace SILVER, Selah, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To crave for happiness in this world is simply to be possessed by a spirit of revolt." - Henrik Ibsen

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I really love this article, because I am the kind of person who observes the world around me; people especially.
RoyalCorona SILVER said...
on May. 26 2013 at 11:19 am
RoyalCorona SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 290 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of us fave failed to match our dream of perfection. I rate us on the basis of our splendid failure to do the impossible. -William Faulkner

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I love this one because of how real it is! It's so visual in a strange way and it's simplistic and yet breathtaking! Great job Koda!!