September 14, 2012
Take a glass out. The usual glass, the only thing in the cupboard.
Set it on the table.
Open the freezer. Feel the chilled bottle stick to warm skin.
Set it on the table.

Pull out the wooden kitchen chair. The one with crayon marks on the legs where some child scribbled on it years ago. Sit down. Take a deep breath. It'll help release the tension in your head. Or, at least, that's what they tell you. It still has yet to work.

Firmly grasp the tall bottle. Open the top, watch the clear liquid flow into crystal. Set the bottle down. Put the glass to your lips.


Notice the burning sensation in your throat as the fluid slips down. The taste of numbness. The taste you used to hate. Now it's simply just a taste. Like water. Nothing.

And that's what you feel. Nothing. You try so hard to feel. Anything. Confusion, sadness, happiness, joy, peacefulness, contempt. There is nothing. Everything is so empty.

Including the glass in your hand.

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vballgirl99 said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 8:33 pm
This is really good writing, and I really like the way that you don't really saywhat this drink is, but by your wonderful description, it is very clear!
DifferentTeen said...
Sept. 24, 2012 at 6:38 pm
Oh wow.. That was so powerful, and moving. I love this style of writing, shot-hand an d choppy. It just grabs my attention more so than long descriptive sentences. Leaves more room for imagination I think. Great job, truely a wonderful piece! Five stars, and going in my favorites!
PoisonMind This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 12:18 pm
Thank you so much, that really means a lot, since I'm a new writer. That just made my day.
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