Snapdragons

May 18, 2012
By DreamingOutQuiet SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
DreamingOutQuiet SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Time and the bell have buried the day,
The black cloud carries the sun away" - Elliot

Oh if life where made of moments, even now and then a bad one. Oh, if life where made of moments then we wouldn't know we had one. - Into the Woods


We lived in a house at the edge of the court, where the grass grew green all year long and my mom had a garden of snapdragons. There was a swing in the yard and a blue door. We lived safely tucked away in an unremarkable Californian town.

My early summers where spent running through sprinkles eating otter pops. My friends and I played cops and robbers barefoot in the street. Oranges and strawberries grew wild.
Things changed in increments; slowly creeping upon the neighborhoods. Tagger signs sprang up out of the morning fog. Cop sirens interrupted the night. A playground was trashed. There was a gang fight at our park.
They took away the lockers; some attempt to keep middle school kids from hiding drugs. In the bathroom they could have looked instead; to watch my childhood friends snort up their futures. Not far from my home where I still jumped in fall leaves a man was killed for the $45.00 in his wallet. My parent’s whispered urgent in the night and the siren’s never stopped.

When my parents grew up, Elk Grove was a just a tiny smudge on the outskirts of Sacramento with one stoplight. It was a good place to grow up, a safe place not far from the infamously dangerous South Sac but another world entirely. Money was everywhere, and soon people where too. The neighborhoods bubbled over; fizzed. Subdivisions grew overnight. Apartments and low income housing burst alongside us.



Business was good, and everything was safe and cute but then suddenly it wasn’t anymore. Suddenly sirens shattered the night, and our illusions. We looked around and realized there was no money anymore, no money to leave or stay only drugs and cracks in the sidewalk, only spray-paint and fog intermingling in the air, only intercity schools crowding over and flooding into ours. I didn’t understand how a monster had crept upon a community and ensnared it when everyone was looking the other way. I never will, truly.

Then the day came where we packed our cars until they where overrun with furniture. We folded clothes into our cardboard boxes along with old photographs. W e taped them shut. Our house was bare and empty. The people who moved their later cut down the swing and let the snapdragons die. I forgot to look back.


The author's comments:
This is loosely based on my move from California. Though this happened to my town I moved under separate circumstances. Enjoy and comment, please.

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EmilyJayce said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 10:24 pm
EmilyJayce, I Want To Be A, Maryland
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Yay! This really was a great piece, i think that the last line is great, and your use of details and being general in some spots was quite effective. Bravo!

on May. 29 2012 at 4:33 pm
DreamingOutQuiet SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Time and the bell have buried the day,
The black cloud carries the sun away" - Elliot

Oh if life where made of moments, even now and then a bad one. Oh, if life where made of moments then we wouldn't know we had one. - Into the Woods

thanks so much. Otterpops are like these frozen posicle sticks that you push up out of this plastic tube to eat. Maybe their not everywhere,lol

A_Journey GOLD said...
on May. 29 2012 at 3:50 pm
A_Journey GOLD, Tampa, Florida
16 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Muse of Poetry should not know that roses in manure grow. ~The Formula, Langston Hughes
You may write me down in history with your bitter, twisted ties. You may trod me in the very dirt, but still, like dirt, I rise. ~Still I Rise, Maya Angelou

Wow! This was amazing! 5 out of 5 stars! I could feel the way you felt while reading this story. Oh, and just wondering, what is a otter pop? 

Thank you for commenting on my work, btw! :D


on May. 26 2012 at 3:59 pm
DreamingOutQuiet SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Time and the bell have buried the day,
The black cloud carries the sun away" - Elliot

Oh if life where made of moments, even now and then a bad one. Oh, if life where made of moments then we wouldn't know we had one. - Into the Woods

thank you so much. and your work is great(:

on May. 26 2012 at 7:50 am
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

wow, what a powerful story. i loved the way that you described the transition from the safe city to a city that was not so safe anymore. it is terrible that violence spreads so easily. 5/5


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