Irreplaceable

January 28, 2012
By Mocha24 BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
Mocha24 BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I quit being afraid when my first venture failed and the sky didn't fall down. ~Allen H. Neuharth


I used to be able to live. I used to be able to swim in the crystal blue ocean. Feel the water slide across my face and the waves gently jostling me. I used to be able to run through the fields, feel the grass tickling my toes and the breeze caressing my hair. I remember the time when I went to my first recital. When I used to be able to dance and feel hundreds of pairs of eyes looking at me with awe. I wish I could feel the pavement sliding out from underneath my feet as I ran and made the winning basket. I wish I could feel a pencil, the hard rough edges kissing the sides of my thumb and finger as it glided across the paper; when I used to be able to draw. I remember the feel of the peeling paint on my window against my hands, when I used to be able to sneak out. I wish I could remember the feel of music vibrating though my body as I danced the night away. I wish I had those memories back. I wish I didn’t remember the feel of that 6th or 7th drink slithering down my throat, when I used to be able to hold a bottle to my lips. I wish I didn’t remember the feel of the cool leather seats against my bare shoulders or the hard smooth feel of the steering wheel between my palms, when I used to be able to drive. I wish I didn’t remember the feel of my head slamming against the steering wheel or my body flying forwards onto the dashboard after I hit that tree. I wish I didn’t remember the fact that I’m sitting in a wheelchair, that for the rest of my life all I would be able to feel is the hard black plastic enveloping me. I think I'm living now; but a life without feeling.



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on Feb. 22 2012 at 5:46 pm
nikki214 BRONZE, Gettysburg, Virginia
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this was really good! this totally painted a picture in my head.

Mocha24 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2012 at 1:28 pm
Mocha24 BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I quit being afraid when my first venture failed and the sky didn't fall down. ~Allen H. Neuharth

Hi guys, This is my first piece on the site and I would love feedback with either positive or negative comments. Thanks! :)


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