Ice Crystal

January 17, 2012
By .king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Hard solid wetness admires itself never asking for more.
Far from frozen like the cleanest glass in the never-lasting
sunlight. A crystal in the company of many other crystals
in the darkest coldest cave; who''s ground is whiter than
the full moon. The explorer would walk through the
cave which polar bears once walked through. He''d swing
the flash light at the crystals which now looks like the angry
sharp teeth of a Saber-toothed tiger's mouth. The explorer blinks, sniffs his pink runny nose and grins. The cave''s unwelcoming
silence fills his mind, he heads towards the exit and glances
back "No can do," he''ll go and find some other cave,
perhaps that''s alive with creatures far from his knowing.
The sun peeks over the snow blankets into the ice-sickled
cave once more, who''s golden glaze of warming heat frosts
the frozen beauty. Till the glass shines its'' best and a droplet
so clear so beautiful it''s nothing.

The author's comments:
It's a dark cake with ice-sickles that glow in the sun's never lasting light!

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.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 29 2014 at 3:31 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Yay! Thank you for your comment. ^_^

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 29 2014 at 3:30 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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I'm touched, thanks Compy! :3

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 29 2014 at 3:30 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Aww, thanks. :3

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 29 2014 at 3:26 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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LOL! Everyone keeps saying it's a poem! I didn't mean for to confuse people, I wrote this when I was just getting into writing. Dunno if you get this or not, I also feel quite silly for replying to a two-year old comment. u_u

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 29 2014 at 3:24 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Actually it's not a poem. But yes, I do get your point. It's utterly poetic. :3   Thank you! ^-^

.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 29 2014 at 3:23 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Thank you! I wish I still wrote like that today. ^-^

on Mar. 3 2014 at 10:06 am
MuhammadMatin BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
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Love. Hate is too great a burden to bear.

Its an interesting read. I love your creativity and choice of words.

on Feb. 14 2013 at 3:04 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I love the way you worded this poem, great Job. I would love to read more so Never Ever stop writing!!! :D

on Sep. 8 2012 at 5:43 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Love the way you used the words skillfully!

xxGPxx said...
on Sep. 8 2012 at 5:41 am
xxGPxx, Fairfield, Ohio
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Really good description....i love your choice of words to describe this beautiful scene  

on Mar. 13 2012 at 12:45 pm
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
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"It's a saying they have, that a man has a false heart in his mouth for the world to see, another in his breast to show to his special friends and his family, and the real one, the true one, the secret one, which is never known to anyone except to himself alone, hidden only God knows where."
-James Clavell, "Shogun"

This is really awesome! I love anything dark, and mysterious...I have a strange fascination with it, and this poem captures the uncertainty of the cave so well.

on Feb. 14 2012 at 9:40 am
mammothfrk PLATINUM, Mammoth Lakes, California
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This is your life, are you who you want to be?

Love the imagery!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 8:36 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

This is so creative. I for some reason read this and thought this could almost relate to life! Just goes to show how people can read the same poem yet come up with different interpretations:) I loved it!

on Jan. 29 2012 at 4:46 pm
seaofsorrows GOLD, Lynnwood, Washington
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Love. A four letter word, short but true. With no hope of being defined. But what's new?



-S. Jordan

Very good article. Love how you compared the ice crystals to the teeth of a saber-tooth tiger. intresting comparison.

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 12:18 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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so pretty! i love it!

on Jan. 27 2012 at 1:54 am
Wildflower30 SILVER, Kolkata, Other
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Create your own sayings, for only then do they make sense most. ---- Me

Love the word play! :)

on Jan. 26 2012 at 11:27 pm
Open_5hoelaces BRONZE, Vadodra, Other
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Great, Silvy. Love it.

on Jan. 26 2012 at 12:27 pm
Future_Worlder PLATINUM, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Carpe Diem!

I agree! its very good! couldnt hve done it better myself!

on Jan. 26 2012 at 12:22 pm
Abandonedships BRONZE, Atlantic City, New Jersey
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Don't let them anchor you down.

Wow. Good writing. (:


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