If this is a masquerade party, I might as well have a ball

August 3, 2011
I have decided to accept the masks people put on and give up on digging deeper. I will be just another person you are tricking, be the people you fear to express to. I tried so hard to get to know people for who they are on the inside yet, look how it worked out. Maybe it’s simply the end of the year and we are sick and tired. I give up. But who knows, another opportunity to rise up could come soon.

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BreeTayler This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 9:24 pm

I love all of your articles. You have such valid points on various topics. But, like the first I commented on, I don't think it should be in paragraph form. It reads more like a poem. My suggestion to you is to seperate every two or three sentences into stanzas. I think the reader's would get much more out of it:)

Oh, And I LOOOVE the title lol it's clever

Vareesha12 replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 10:27 pm

Thank you for going through them all!

That's an interesting idea, I think it might work better that way as well(:

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