Telling Detail Exercise-First Time on a Rollercoaster

July 14, 2011
By TangoMangoes BRONZE, Wayne, Pennsylvania
TangoMangoes BRONZE, Wayne, Pennsylvania
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“Come on, it’s not that scary,” Aisha tried convincing me. “Let’s go to that one. It’s not that high.”

“Ugh…do I have to?”

“Yes, Rachelle, you do. You have to ride at least one rollercoaster in your life. You’re thirteen and you haven’t even stood in line for one of these rollercoasters before.”

“Well that’s because I wanted to stay alive for these thirteen years.”

“Rachelle, let’s go! The line’s getting shorter.”

The author's comments:
Another one of my writing camp writing exercise/activity thing. We had to write a telling detail about a topic we were given, and mine was "first time on a rollercoaster".

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