Radiance

May 31, 2011
By tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.


This place where I lay is surreal, inconceivably beautiful, magical almost. The sun pours through the leaves into my clothes, my body and my soul. A transparent beam of happiness, immediately gains my strength to breathe satisfactory, smile superior, pour out my mind and distil my soul. A wonderful place to be when everything’s as dire as it is.

This ground, which I lay, is inviting, a comfortable embrace, and forever holding on. Manifesting my best-friend lay here beside me, her crystal blue eye’s staring into my soul. I smile as she fades away into the never-ending forest of possibility. Blades of grass prickle my skin and wrap around my arms. Perfectly molding the shape of my body, bending each and every piece of meadow to forever embrace my shape in its fascinating canvas. If only she were here to embrace this beauty with me.

This transparent beam of happiness reminds me of her, her radiance, her beauty, her honey hair and golden ring, shining in the sunlight. Her personality pours into your soul just like this beam in front of me. This meadow, so inviting, reminds me of her.

Flawless.


The author's comments:
Just something i came up with. Honestly no inspiration.

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on Jun. 29 2011 at 7:20 pm
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

Thank you so much!

on Jun. 25 2011 at 7:52 pm
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

Thank you so much(:

I'm glad you got as much joy out of it as i did.


on Jun. 25 2011 at 5:03 pm
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

Thank you!(:

That was my goal!


on Jun. 24 2011 at 7:37 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

i was... hmmm..
i like.. the descriptions and such.. this is good and short -- which makes it easy to read. :)

on Jun. 19 2011 at 3:31 pm
rosaposa BRONZE, Orono, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Slow down, this night's a perfect shade of dark blue" Jack's Mannequin

i loved how it was so descriptive, it was really great!

on Jun. 17 2011 at 1:31 pm
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

You're so welcome,

andd thank you!!


on Jun. 17 2011 at 1:30 pm
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

Thank you! I planned on it just kind of being an overview of the book. and then sticking it in when i need it.

on Jun. 17 2011 at 1:29 pm
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

Pahaha(:

Thankk you so much! I'm good with the juicy words!


exotus SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 12:22 pm
exotus SILVER, Aspen, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If a writer falls in love with you, you can never die"

i really love all of your descriptions and juicy words! it kept me captivated!

on Jun. 16 2011 at 6:13 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

You have some very interesting descriptions here, though I'd like to know more about the story. Other than that, it's great! :)

on Jun. 16 2011 at 10:26 am
wow! i really like this :) thanks for suggesting this to me

on Jun. 15 2011 at 8:52 pm
Dizzy.Bird BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you shall land among the stars."

Really wonderful description. Awesome! ^^

on Jun. 15 2011 at 1:32 pm
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

Thanks!

annd i will


PJD17 SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2011 at 10:22 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

This is great i really liked this keep up the great work  if you have time could you please check out and comment on my story Numb.  i would really appreciate the feedback


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