I Remember

March 26, 2011
By Jessoxo BRONZE, Telford, Other
Jessoxo BRONZE, Telford, Other
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I remember the day you slipped away, I remember seeing you lying there as if you were asleep.
I had seen you asleep so many times.
I remember how I’d always do my best not to wake you, creeping and sneaking past trying to be silent.
But that day I would have done anything to wake you, to make you open your eyes.
I remember your eyes, your perfect sky colored eyes.
I remember how your laugh made everything better
I remember your smile, a smile that could not go unnoticed.
I remember how you would never give up.
I remember how you stood for what you believed in.
I remember your warm embrace
I remember your voice, your kind voice.
I remember everything
I remember…..you

The author's comments:
This is about a relative of mine who past away two years ago. This person meant a great deal to me and was in a huge part of my life.
I wrote this because a lot of my memories involve this person and my memories are what inspire me

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PJD17 SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 4:55 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

very moving   i'm sorry about the passing of your relative   this artical is a very good tribute to that person though     could you please check out and comment on my Story Manso's Shame  i would really appreciate the feedback


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