The Chase

March 24, 2011
My adrenalin began to get in my way. My nervous nature shook my bones; I was way too far ahead. I could hear the others voice faintly, but I refused to listen. I would have no recollections of this night. The dark shiny pavement stood dead silent in front of my faded converse prints. I was running in circles. We all were. My heart began to pound hard in my ear, the ground made a shift to the right, throwing me off balance. My knee scraped the sidewalk, blood mixing with the mud now consuming my lower body. I remember thinking this was the end…





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shabaz69 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 1:32 pm
cute cough cough :)
 
PJD17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 6:28 pm
very descriptive  great work keep it up  could you please check out and comment on my story Manso's Shame  i would really appreciate the feedback
 
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