Un-Predictible Love

March 12, 2011
By Geek-Chick97 BRONZE, Buckner, Missouri
Geek-Chick97 BRONZE, Buckner, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Te he FAIL!! :)

It was Valentines Day, I was in 6the grade.When a boy came up to me and handed me a valentine. I looked up at him and Boy did i ever jump! He had long greasy black hair theat was pulled back in a ponytail, brown snake eyes, yellow teethe and cheek bones theat were covered withe acne.
He frowned as he said," Whats wrong?" Did i frighten you?"
I gagged his breathe reeked of onions and his voice had a crackle to it theat pierced my ears. I said " A little but, I don't mind."
"Well good" He said, because i really like you and well you may not remember but we were best friends in 4the grade.
OH MY GOSH!! It was Dawson thee hottest guy in thee school . Now he looked like theis!?! What happened?!? But.. I do like him So....
I opened up thee valentine theat read, Will you be my girlfriend? I yelled OF COURSE!! Every one laughed but i didn't mind. H was my penny loafer wearing guy.
And I was happy.

The author's comments:
I went to a young authors conference today and the author Maryfrances Wagner gave us a package of words to choose from that we could use in our Micro Fiction so i chose the words-Ponytail,snake eyes,yellow teeth,cheek bones and penny loafers.

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