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I was laying their, barley awake, then I suddenly fall asleep and I am all alone, alone in a big open place. Then I hear, footsteps, fast footsteps I whip around and I see my dead brother, and he looks mad, so I shout “ Tim, stop running!!!” But nothing is coming out of my mouth, I am just thinking it, so he continues running towards me. So I start running, but my legs aren't moving, so I am in freak out mode. Tim is just feats away, then I realize “ wait I am just dreaming this, so I can controle what he can and cannot do.” So I think in my head, stop running, and he stops. I think in my head, run, run as fast as you can. So it works, I am running. But then I think, wait I haven't seen my brother in 3 years, so I go back and I start a conversation. But then, by mistake I think for Tim to start running again. So here I am 3 feet away from him so I think “RUN, RUN FAST” so I am, I am being chased by my dead brother. Then I trip, I look up and, nothing. Tim is gone. He is out of my dream. Then I turn back around and I see my best friend, Victoria standing right there in front of me. She has a knife in her hand, and she looks even madder than Tim did. Then .....




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Christamonkey said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 1:01 pm:
its okay not the greatest but it is good
 
luvtaylor16 replied...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 4:41 pm :
thx, thx a WHOLE lot lol cu 2morrow!
 
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fashionluvr16 said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 4:40 pm:
Macx14, would you call yourself a fan of me?
 
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Macx14 said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 9:33 am:
Pretty good! Keep this up!
 
fashionluvr16 replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 11:42 am :
thanks, I will!! Do you like how i left you hanging?
 
Macx14 replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 11:45 am :
Yeah, that was perfect, and you're welcome! Maybe you could check out some of my stuff, if you wanted. I'd really like your input!
 
fashionluvr16 replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 4:33 pm :
ok i will do that!
 
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