Growing Up, Up, and Away

September 3, 2010
By RainyWriter GOLD, Redmond, Washington
RainyWriter GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Only the smart, talented, amazing, and insane are remembered in history.


You see them in the crowd at high school graduations. You see them sitting in the pews of a church at a wedding. And you see them perched on the edge of the benches at the playground, keeping an eye on a drooling snot-maker as it (sorry, he or she) swings on the monkey bars or flies down the slide.

You guessed it. Moms. They’re the ones who cradle you when you’re a baby, tie your shoes as you toddle off to Kindergarten, contemplate that V-neck on the first day of Jr. High, watch wistfully through the window as you ride off with your prom date, and sit there amongst wadded-up tissues as you vent about a certain him dumping you for your best friend.

Usually they’re the ones who hoard nostalgia and release it sporadically, such as bursting into tears over your size-12 Converse because they remember your tiny booties back in diaper-days.

I watch the streets of our cul-de-sac, waiting for the fateful headlights to illuminate Mrs. Peterson’s hedges. Down the hall, my parents are sound-asleep, Dad snoring softly and Mom murmuring quietly in her sleep. Like always.

I sink into the comforter carefully folded on my bed. My hands are shaking; I bounce my cheap Nokia ($20 at Target) palm to palm. I shut my eyes and count to ten before I open them.

My room, small as it is, is what you’d expect of a teenager. Teen Vogue and Seventeen mags crammed in a wicker box, walls covered in posters from my favorite bands, and a small portion of shelf devoted to orchestra, art, volleyball, and fencing awards. Yet I still remember what it looked like a few years ago, when I thought Hello Kitty and Jesse McCartney were ultra-cute.


Some things have survived the test of time. Bubba, the stuffed white cat I’ve had ever since I was one, sits solemnly next to Pooh Bear and another stuffed cat, Zip. The rest of my toys have long since been handed off to the Goodwill or are hidden in the basement.

God. I rub my temples. Now I’m nostalgic. Why?

It’s the best for all of us, I tell myself, strangling my cell in my left hand. I’ll come back eventually. When they understand.

I swallow back an abrupt surge of tears.

Lex says we can make it in California, hiding out in Los Angeles. Or he has contacts up in Vancouver for us. My folks loathe him. Maybe it’s the dirty-blond emo hair, or the snake tattoo that goes from his wrist around the base of his thumb. Or the fact his father walked out on him after choking him at a family BBQ and his mother is a pill-popper. Or that he’s sixteen and I’m fourteen.

They don’t see him the way I do. The way he admires my drawings, how my lines are never quite straight and I constantly use complementary colors. The way his watery-blue eyes look in the sun, or when he smiles and gets that little dimple in his cheek. Mom tells me I have a bright future; Dad tells me Lex will spend his life flipping burgers at McDonalds.

I press a hand against my chest. My heart hammers wildly against it. They don’t understand. I hope they will eventually, when I’ve gone out with Lex and done things my way.

My eyes wander over to the string stretching the length of the wall behind my bed. Attached by clothespins are pictures, pre-school to now. Eighth grade.

There’s a photo of me scowling at the camera while I stand in a knee-deep sandbox. I remember that, the pre-school teacher didn’t like me and smelled like peppermint.

First grade. I’m with a whole group of girls. There’s a cast on my ankle. They would eventually grow up to be the shallow, “popular” girls that want nothing to do with me, and hate me because I’m with Lex. Even then, they only wanted to be in the photo. And sign my cast.

Third grade. With my best friends to this day. Tanya, Pen, Ro, and Jeanie. All dressed up for Halloween.

Sixth grade. Last year of elementary school for our district. Me dressed in heels and a striped blue dress, grinning crookedly with my arms slung around two of my best guy friends.

Sevvy year. First year of Jr. High. I’m gazing wearily at the camera, gnawing on a pencil. There’s another one of me, where I actually look good. I’m bent over a painting, my hair almost on the canvas.

Eighth grade year. Several pictures of me with friends in orchestra or in the lunch room. A small picture of Lex cradling me in his arms with my head on his shoulder while both us make goofy faces, is tucked at the far edge of the string.

Even my best friends don’t understand me like he does.

I push myself off the bed and wander over to the window again. Feverishly check my wristwatch. He’ll be here in two minutes, he’s very punctual. I grab my duffel bag and heavy messenger bag. Packed inside are my toiletries and several bundles of clothes and underwear. A couple of energy bars, a water bottle, my student ID, a pair of rain boots, and all of the cash from my saving’s account. The money was meant for a new cello. I can’t drag my rental with me, it’s a stupid idea and the instrument’s too big. It’s not like I play a flute or something.

Besides, $1,373.22 is lighter.

I look around the room. I didn’t forget anything; I have all the solid necessities.

Necessities? My eyes flit back to the pictures. Before I can stop myself, I march over and grab every single one of them, shoving them into the messenger bag. On second thought, I kneel on the carpet and paw beneath my bed for my shoebox full of sentimental stuff. Lex won’t mind, but it’s one of the few things he won’t understand. He’s not very sentimental.

I shove the silver locket that belonged to my late grandmother into the messenger bag. I snatch up a card filled with my mother’s curly script and my father’s spiky scratches, inside is a pressed scrap of lavender. The scent is sweet, and it makes my heart ache.

I check my watch. A small tap on my window startles me. I look over just as another pebble bounces off the glass.

“Showtime,” I murmur to myself, the word sticking in my throat. I scramble to my feet and pad out of my room. I’m just about to bolt down the stairs when I freeze. I catch my breath.

One more thing, I promise myself. One last thing. I tiptoe down the hall and gingerly inch the door open, praying the hinges won’t creak. They don’t. I thank God silently.

They seem so peaceful, younger. My eyes trace the familiar shape of Daddy’s jaw, the curve of Ma’s lips. The moonlight peeking through the blinds illuminates the gray in their hair. When did that happen?

I still remember them the way they were when I was younger. I wonder if they remember me that way too. Suddenly a lump creeps into my throat and I have to stifle a small whimper.

I’ll miss them. But it’s best for me. For them. For everyone.

“I love you,” I whisper. Those three words used to leave my lips all the time when I was little. I guess I stopped saying it so much after I turned ten. But I do. As family we love each other three times more than anyone else…but we hate each other three times more than anyone else.

They won’t let me follow my own path. Okay, I guess I’ll just have to embark alone.

I leave the door ajar. Tiptoe down the stairs and almost run out the front door. Sure enough, Lex’s beat-up truck is stalling in front of the mailboxes. I can see his hair, bleached silver by the moon’s light. My heart beats even faster. I dump my stuff in the cargo bed and climb into the shotgun seat.

His fingers reach out for mine, and they mold together like matching puzzle pieces.

“You sure about this?” he asks. He knows I’m leaving behind a life.

“Of course,” I say. I know he’s running away from a personal Hell.

Both of us want to put distance between painful memories. “We’ll find a place. A studio for you. Enroll in a community college. I promise. I promise I won’t let you down—”

I cut him short by pressing my finger against his lips. “I promise I won’t let either of us down.” I let go of his hand and flop back in the peeling, leather seat. “Just go, okay?”

His foot slams down on the gas. With a deep rumble, we blast out of the cul-de-sac, and into the unknown. In the suburbs, I’m the overachieving champion with an amazingly bright future. Out there, I’m nobody, just another plain face in the crowd.

Out there, I am independent. Out there, I can grow up.


The author's comments:
We all have felt as though we don't fit in, that we're pressured to do something or be something. Some may have even contemplated running away to fulfill their own dreams. I hope people can relate to it, put themselves in her shoes, or even Lex's shoes.

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on Jul. 17 2011 at 3:33 pm
RainyWriter GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Only the smart, talented, amazing, and insane are remembered in history.

All of that sounds incredible, though I don't know if I personally could do it. It's not that I don't trust you or the others, but I don't think my parents would consider that "safe". Unless it was some official thing, I don't think I could go. :( I wish I could though! Don't let what I've said dictate anything though, if others say they can then you should do it and tell me how it goes. :)

on Jul. 16 2011 at 10:00 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Carpe diem."

No, it has nothing to do with WIA haha, and nothing's been posted on the actual site about it yet; I'm just gathering responses off-site right now to see if it's worth putting the effort into planning anything (and anyone who doesn't have an account on another website along with WI won't be invited, for safety reasons).

It would be a meet up of a bunch of us at a hotel somewhere for a long weekend -- arrive Friday, leave Sunday. We'd have writing workshops with one another, go see a movie or a play or something, go sightseeing, and just generally hang around all that. Everyone would be required to have a parent or other responsible adult, 21 years or older, in attendance along with them, and everyone would have separate rooms, so it would be extremely safe.

So, interested? :)


on Jul. 16 2011 at 6:29 pm
RainyWriter GOLD, Redmond, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Only the smart, talented, amazing, and insane are remembered in history.

I just finished 8th grade, going into 9th. I'm glad it's relatable (yay! I achieved realistic fiction!). Though by no means am I encouraging running away (although I admit, it seems tempting sometimes). Thank you for commenting, it means so much to see these critiques and remarks and such, it shows that people are actually reading what I write.

on Jul. 16 2011 at 6:26 pm
RainyWriter GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Only the smart, talented, amazing, and insane are remembered in history.

Um...that's not WIA (Write it Awards...) is it? Could you explain a little bit? Or just tell me where I could find info (gaaaaaah! I am SO out of Write It these days...mostly do to personal laziness related to summer vacation). It sounds interesting!

on Jul. 15 2011 at 11:49 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Carpe diem."

Hi Twinks! Question for you: Would you be interested in an unofficial Write It Conference during the summer of 2012?

on Jun. 15 2011 at 2:48 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing's black or white, its all just a shade of gray---

















TI "Live your Life" ft Rihanna

*hand flies to mouth* this relates to me so well!! :O I myself am an 8th grader, my mom gives me stress, and..........i feel this girl's need for freedom. And in her position i would've done the same thing.

Sorry for such personal feedback but this story caught me! I'm shocked!!

This sounds a lot like a girl telling her real story then it does fiction. But that adds to the amazingness.

This piece is so creative, and i love how it made me feel like i CAN run away from my problems and into a new life. But i dont plan on doing THAT until I'm at least finished with high school.

And now i can kinda understand why my mom is so scared about me having a boyfriend.

Thank you so much for writing this----------i mean it!!


on May. 10 2011 at 6:24 pm
RainyWriter GOLD, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Only the smart, talented, amazing, and insane are remembered in history.

Thank you so much for responding to my work! Anyway, yeah, now that I look back on it the beginning was probably unnecessary. Thank you for the critique and response, it means so much to me.

on May. 10 2011 at 5:09 pm
IncorrectlyWired GOLD, Milford, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"No great genius has ever existed without some touch of madness." - Aristotle

Wow, it was so real and apparent. You felt for the character. It did keep you guessing till the end. Good and realistic thoughts. The opening paragraph was catchy, but it did feel a little out of place. Right off the bat I thought it was going to be some wistful memory of her dead mother or something. I dunno, I liked it anyway.

on Oct. 3 2010 at 5:52 pm
forgottenpenname GOLD, Troy, Michigan
12 articles 0 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Carpe diem."

Not sure entirely how the beginning fits with the rest of this (I'm really tired so it's probably just me), but I enjoyed it beyond belief nevertheless. You have such a way with words, Twinks. :) I love how the entire way through you're going, "She's not really going to go, is she? No way is she REALLY going to go... She is NOT acutally going to go!! SHE'S ACTUALLY GOING!! NO WAYYY!!" and then she does, but it seems to be okay. Interesting twist to it. You made me really sympathize with your character. Like when I finished I was sitting here going, "I hope her life turns out okay." I feel like she's an actual person, not just a figment of someone's imagination.

Oh, and I love your username on here, lol. :)


on Sep. 10 2010 at 5:45 pm
MaddieWo PLATINUM, Marstons Mills, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"If I'd a knowed more, I would a loved more." -Pilate Dead, Song of Solomon

This was AH-MAZ-ING. Like really though. The emotions were just captured so perfectly and its so realistic.. nice job :D

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on Sep. 8 2010 at 10:52 am
Babylufin GOLD, Liberal, Missouri
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"'For I know the plans I have for you', declares the Lord, 'plans to prosper you and not harm you, plans to give you hope and a future.'" Jeremiah 29:11. Thank you Lord, for this future you've given me.

I loved this! You had me glued with the title! I felt like this is something I would definitely read in a book. I thought the ending was terrific; the depth, the emotion, the ignorance of teen love. I also like how you didn't say whether or not Lex really was just another teenage boy, or that he truly was sentimental about his relationship with the main character; coming from the girl's point of view, you can't tell.

Anyways this was awesome. :)

Please check out some of my work if you have the time, and leave a comment! :) I'd appreciate it!


on Sep. 7 2010 at 10:01 pm
OMG! That was so amazing! I have never read anything like that ever! It felt so real!!!! I is so proud of u Hellgaaaaaaaaaaaah!

on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:21 pm
MadisonReneeJane GOLD, Norman, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
The walls we build around us to keep out the sadness also keep out the joy. - Jim Rohn

I loved it, but I really want to find out what happens! Please write more and message me if you post it!


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