The Flag

August 21, 2010
By AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)


Fire was flying, and it seemed like the whole world was exploding. My brothers in arms and I ran through the barrage, praying fervently that we would live to see our families again. We charged into the enemy stronghold, desperately searching for cover. The noise was deafening – the sound of destruction and death. The very air smelled of sweat and fear and blood and smoke. My tongue tasted like copper. I was biting it again. All I could see was fire. I was living through Hell.

When the battle was over, I was a changed man. Many of my friends were dead or wounded. Things that were perfect hours earlier were piles of rubble. But it was worth it to see our flag flying high. Victorious.



There are many who would say politicians are a slimy group. I laughed to myself and shook my head, my bifocals sliding down my nose ever so slightly. They sure are, some at least. With their hot-headed debating, their “top issues”, and their press coverage. But there are some who are in it for the good of the country. To represent the public and give the people a voice. Like me. I shield my eyes with a wrinkled hand to gaze up at the stars and stripes once more before entering the Senate. God bless America.



I say teary good-byes to my friends, and then climb into the car. My brother and mom and dogs squeeze in as well, shoving our most important belongings aside. The horse trailer is hooked up behind us, causing the car to grunt as we pull out of the driveway for the last time. We wave to our house and our memories as we drive down the road, then we turn the corner and don’t look back. We wipe our tears and stare strait ahead, ready to build a new life around a different Air Force base. As we drive away from our home, I see a flag flying in front of a school, and am tempted to salute. Because America makes it all worth the sacrifice. We do it for the flag.



The twenty-one guns ring out, a wife cries after a meeting with a uniformed officer, and a mother hangs a star she had never wanted to see in the window. Tears run down the faces of silent soldiers. The whole town comes to honor the memories. A child will be born without a father. A young man has fallen in Iraq. But as the town watches the American flag be folded, they know he was proud to give his life for his country.


A million sacrifices, big and small. A million tears. A million goodbyes. For the flag.



Teenagers sit around a jacked-up truck at a hunting club in a small town. The winter wind was strong the night before. The flag had caught on the flagpole, and had twisted and torn. It hung, limp and tattered, upside-down from the pole. When asked to fix it, the teenagers refused. They looked at the abused flag and felt nothing.



Red and white stripes, with white stars on a blue square. The same flag in a warzone, over the senate, in front of a school, in the hands of a fallen hero’s widow, and tattered in front of a hunting club.

They are all American flags.

They are all supposed to stand for the same thing.

But how can they?


The author's comments:
This is a very real and true idea, I just decided to call it fiction because I made up three of the viewpoints. Unfortunately, I didn't make up the teenagers. :(

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AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 24 2011 at 7:11 am
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

Thank you! :)  I'll check that movie out - it sounds really good. :)

on Mar. 23 2011 at 5:08 pm
Gettysburg63 PLATINUM, Waukesha, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you are going to win any battle, you have to do one thing. You have to make the mind run the body. Never let the body tell the mind what to do... the body is never tired if the mind is not tired." -General George S. Patton

Good work. It would be tough for me to express my ideas as fluently as you did. When you stated a "hunting club in a small town" I immediatly though of the movie The Deer Hunter. Two hunter friends in a small Pennsylvania town enlist to fight in Vietnam. Its a good movie if you haven't seen it.

AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 13 2010 at 3:48 pm
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

Thank you!!!

AshTree SILVER said...
on Nov. 13 2010 at 12:58 pm
AshTree SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
7 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live your art" -made this one up myself. Simple, but true.

Loved it! i like how you went from one person to the next and how they all relate to each other in the end.

AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:35 am
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

Thanks! :D

on Nov. 10 2010 at 5:02 pm
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
8 articles 2 photos 513 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

I really like the convincing viewpoints. I love your impression and portrayal of war too! Many of the soldiers who came back from war live by the phrase: Live for today, not for tomorrow. I agree with the above comment on the Politician's viewpoint. The others were ecxcellent! Well done! 

AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 18 2010 at 10:15 am
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

Thanks so much!

on Sep. 18 2010 at 10:11 am
TheMadAuthor BRONZE, Fairfax, Virginia
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Wow.  Well written!  I liked the multiple viewpoints and the honest, balanced look at war and patriotism.  It looks like you've submitted a lot of stuff on here...keep writing!

AsIAm PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 15 2010 at 2:35 pm
AsIAm PLATINUM, Somewhere, North Carolina
48 articles 3 photos 608 comments

Favorite Quote:
"According to some, heroic deaths are admirable things. (Generally those who don't have to do it. Politicians and writers spring to mind.) I've never been convinced by this argument, mainly because, no matter how cool, stylish, composed, unflappable, manly, or defiant you are, at the end of the day you're also dead. Which is a little too permanent for my liking." — Jonathan Stroud (Ptolemy's Gate)

Thank you!  I will think about what you said about the politician - it was a good idea!  As for the asterixes (I really can't spell it either), I have them on my copy, but for some reason they didn't copy over. :S

Thanks again!


on Sep. 15 2010 at 2:23 pm
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments

It's about time I returned the favor and read some of your work :)

 

So I love the idea. I love the way you presented three different viewpoint. However, it was really confusing because you only used empty space to separate the different viewpoints. Asterixes (spelling???) would be better, or a page break. 

 

The politician's viewpoint was the weakest, I think, because of the sentence you used to start it off. It's a sentence that's very common, and when I read it a part of me said, "Oh. That again." It might be just me, but I think rephrasing that. Also, why is he suddenly thinking about that? It wasn't very clear. 

 

Except for that there was just one other thing: the paragraph, "A million sacrifices, big and small. A million tears. A million goodbyes. For the flag.," is extremely strong. But it feels like an end! Could you perhaps rewrite the end and move it? Because after it all the rest seems...extra. Even though it isn't. 

 

I really enjoyed reading this!!!



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