It's Never the End

August 17, 2010
By , Rimbey, AL
I held him tightly as tears crept down his face in an almost solid stream, landing on his dirty blue-jeans. "You can't keep doing this to yourself!" I tried to tell him this every time.
"Jenny," His voice trailed off and I could tell how weak he felt, "I know why." The once high, squeaky voice broke.

I hated this game, Jordan would always make it hard for me to understand. "Jordan, what are you talking about?"

He looked at me with his big, emerald eyes hiding behind his too-long black hair. "Nate," I almost couldn't believe he could be talkative at a time like this, "He- he told me why."

"Why we broke up? Because you already know why." I shifted around on his Batman sheets, now speckled with blood.

"No," Jordan almost looked mad, "Why you did what I do. Why you tried to kill yourself."

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Blue4 said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 2:26 pm

Confusing, but this would make a good prolouge. Perhaps not so confusing as intriguing.It leaves a question, and that's good. Awesome job!

By the way, can you look at some of my stories, rate, and critisize? I'd appreciate that.

SamIsSmiling replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 8:19 pm
Thank you so much(: I'll deff check out your stuff!
hannahsmithy said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 6:02 am
im not exactly sure what happened, its a bit confusing but i actually really like it :)
SamIsSmiling replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 8:18 pm
Thanks, I didn't really work on it that much, I don't like the non-info I gave either :P
BaileyBaby13 said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 10:30 pm
I agreed, this was really interesting. But I'm left a little confused, so I hope you continue it!,(:
SamIsSmiling replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 11:49 pm
Thanks! Yeah, I've been working on it for a while and when I started it, I anticipated this being the prolouge to a book. (:
living4God said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 7:22 pm
it was really interesting! you should write more
samyo6 replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 9:04 pm
Thank you! :)
HottyErinNikkole said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 3:17 am
LOVE IT! Keep writing(:
samyo6 replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 2:45 pm
Thanks! C8
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