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My Midnight Masterpiece

August 2, 2010
By J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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As I gently glided my knife across the peanut butter, I licked my lips in anticipation. Watching the beautiful master piece, more commonly known as a PB&J, unfold before my eyes, was delightful. Oh, how my tongue craved to taste such pleasure. I cleaned off my knife in preparation to begin on the jelly side. With great perfection, I spread the delectable grape jelly to each corner of the fluffy white bread. Wheat just brought too much of a healthy twist to my midnight snack. My mouth watered as the two sides became one amazing sandwich! Finally, I poured myself a tall glass of 2% milk and made my way back to my bedroom. Just before I took that long anticipated bite, I thought to myself, “I wonder who was the matchmaker of this most perfect pair?”


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J.C.Evans GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 8:35 pm
J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Two thumbs up for PB&J!!! lol Thanks

J.C.Evans GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 8:34 pm
J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Thanx!

And if you ever find it...let me know!!! :):)


J.C.Evans GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 8:27 pm
J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Thank you! I wish it was longer too but my brain didn't want to come up with any more words lol

on Aug. 14 2010 at 3:34 pm
VioletsandVoice, Spiritwood, North Dakota
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five stars for PB&J hehe

on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:54 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Haha so cute! Hooray to pb&j!!!

You have such good decription thro out your story and I love how it ends with a question...and ya who rly did invent the sandwich?!?


Vickie893 said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:36 pm
I love how you made a simple peanut butter and jelly sandwhich so exciting! I love the line about wheat bread, it adds a little personality into the story...I do wish it was longer though! It would be such a cute beginning paragraph to a totally random story! but anyways I loved it and your other work(poetry&photography) Submit more!


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