Why don't you love me?

June 17, 2010
By Anonymous

Why don't you love me? Was I not good enough for you or was it you just being your selfish self. Daddy, me and mommy were scared for you being out late god only knows what you were doing. Staying up a little later to make sure you cigrette was out so nothing would burn. Daddy, you were always nicer to my brother then you were to me. Did you like him better than me or did you not know how to communicate with me. I would keep your secrets in the room when you guys went somewhere else. When you wanted to end your life with that gun and gave it to grandpa and I stepped in front of you and said " Take me instead!" I was doing it for you and only you!



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on Jul. 18 2010 at 3:09 am
crzybookworm BRONZE, Highland, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The only thing to fear is fear itself."

I can really relate to this. Great job! You could expand it more tho.

on Jul. 16 2010 at 5:15 pm
Heathurrlovesyouu SILVER, Morristown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing of me is original, I am the combined effort of everyone I have ever known." -Invisible Monsters

I like this, a lot. Short, sweet, and to the point.

Check out mine, too? : )


on Jul. 15 2010 at 10:03 pm
peacemaker14 SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"in my life I've learned that growing up is hard and head banging is crucial"- hayley williams

that was truly beautiful! it's inspiring and powerful.

JessieB SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2010 at 9:12 pm
JessieB SILVER, Elkton, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
an eye for an eye, and the whole world goes blind~Ghandi

this is good.(:

can you check some of my work outt??

thanks(:


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on Jul. 14 2010 at 5:43 pm
courteycat, Lompoc, California
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interesting...

Well done:) Keep writing you have talent:D

Bdub555 GOLD said...
on Jul. 14 2010 at 10:55 am
Bdub555 GOLD, Keytesville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"If you speak kind words, you will hear kind echos."

Thanks for the criticism and comment!

iDogrocker said...
on Jul. 14 2010 at 12:19 am
iDogrocker, Lebanon, Oregon
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I feel like I really connected with your writing. The ideas and content were well done, but you should have someone help you edit some of the conventions and nuts and bolts. Other than that, keep writing! You obviously have talent.

Bdub555 GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 10:23 pm
Bdub555 GOLD, Keytesville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"If you speak kind words, you will hear kind echos."

Thanks everyone for your comments!

on Jul. 13 2010 at 7:30 pm
waiting_to_be_found GOLD, Conifer, Colorado
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Yeah, I have to agree with everyone else. It was so simple, innocent and yet got the point across. Beautiful. 

on Jul. 12 2010 at 11:45 pm
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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So do I. It's so powerful, and innocent at the same time. I can relate so much. Thank you for writing this.

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:26 pm
hopelesssharpie BRONZE, Srghsfgjd, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Truth is stranger than fiction. Fiction must make sense." -Mark Twain.
"I'm not crazy, my reality is simply different than yours."
"I'd rather be hated for who I am than be loved for who I'm not."

i love this.




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