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Stained Walls

May 11, 2010
By Anonymous

Blood stains the wall as she struggles to reach the phone. No one can hear her cries for help. There has been a terrible mistake. She thought she was ready for the end, she poisoned her body with pills, mutillated her wrists. Giving up on everything she thought or believed in. Its too late now, she stops struggling and forces a smile on her pretty face.



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on Jun. 7 2010 at 2:49 pm
horse95lover BRONZE, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read" - Groucho Marx

this is pretty good, but you should expand more on the story. I think this would be a great last paragraph to a longer story.