May 8, 2010
The mask is perfect.. no one ever suspects you..but behind, the face that once was is longer able to hold.. If the mask is removed, the mask you spent 15 years molding, the tough girl..the happy girl..the one that nothing bothers..she'll disappear and reality will kick in...that girl who's very heart is been breaking over and over again until its nothing left will show her colors and no one will understand.. one more more more look is all it will take... the criticism the judgement..even when its not voiced its there.. she wonders why the world says be yourself but makes you feel like dirt when you do.. she's delt but now she cant deal anymore..lifes been over for her for a long time and the wall she built is coming down.. theres only one solution.. its breathtaking how easy it cut one jump and all the heartache the pain the hurt for not being accepted not being good enough not being worthy enough not being important enough to be cared for.. itll all be so easy to make the drama the terrible emptiness deep inside give way to peace to silence the never ending silent screams only she can here.. the burning hole deep inside only she can see and cut one jump and she'll be free but can she really be free or will she suffer doesnt matter.. this world is a hell its own.. she can do it.. its doesnt take much..a dark place for away a simple cut in the right place..

but...theres a light..a warm hand on her shoulder..a smile in all the criticsm..a laugh in all the judgement..that one friend that spark of hope can change it all in the instant.. SOMEBODY ACTUALLY CARES IF I LIVE OR DIE..SOMEONE IS BETTER THAN NO ONE AND ILL STAY HERE JUST FOR THAT SOMEONE..

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SkullsCantCry said...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 6:41 pm
I'm using this in one of my assignments...and i only use REALLY AMAZING writing soo as u can tell im abt to say.................THIS IS FRICKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!! xD
still-a-novice said...
May 31, 2010 at 2:17 pm
This is really good. I love the way that you captured the will. I really like the way that the title reflects the content. Keep up the good work!
Authorgal98 replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 11:21 am
This is exactly how i feel sometimes. Please keep writing, cuz I can relate to it.
StankaBug replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 2:41 pm
thanks for the support..i try to write often but seldom have leisure to put it on. thanks again.
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