"Summer to Remeber"

May 15, 2010
By Corbin982 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
Corbin982 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
If you fall down, get right back up. Because quiters will never succeed.

But than my mother yells at me. To me it sounded like she thought I couldn’t hear her and she was trying to let me hear. But as I listened more carefully. I could only hear one word that shot through me faster and harder than a bullet.


I thought my heart stopped right then and there. But I was still alive. At the moment, I was frozen. My mother was yelling at me to get back on the beach and fast. But before I could move, it attacked.

The author's comments:
This is from the book that I'm working on know. So far it is 10 pages long and this was my FAVORTIE part to write.
I was inspired to write this because over the summer of 2009 i was watching Shark Week on the Discovery Channel, when the thought popped into my head- "why don't i write a fiction story about a shark attack. So immediatly went to my laptop and started writing. Within' 1 hour, i had 5 pages done. I hope to finish it soon and get it published!!

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